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spro.
21. januar 2007 af
lith (Slettet)
hej er der nogen der lige kan kigge min opgave igennem..og tjæk om der er nogen sproglig fejl..
på forhånd tak
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It is an American short story written by Tobias Wolf and was published in 1995. The story is about a book called Anders, and the book is critic. Anders is middle age and he is standing at the bank, and there is a long row. He is discussing with a woman in front of him about the banks service.
Anders has continued discussing and provokes the bank robbers, but a moment later the rubber has heard Anders argument, than the rubber says to Anders that he have to be quiet. Anders continued again had not realized that the situation is seriously, and that make the robber angry and that result that the robber shot Anders in his head.
The last part of the short story is about the thoughts of Anders when the bull passes in his brain. The reader heard what he thoughts about and what he didn’t. For example he didn’t thought about his family and not about his lover in his life. But he thought about a special period in summer where a boy who played with had made a grammatical mistake. The boy says “they is” instead of” there is”, it was the last thing he remembers and stuck in his head.
på forhånd tak
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It is an American short story written by Tobias Wolf and was published in 1995. The story is about a book called Anders, and the book is critic. Anders is middle age and he is standing at the bank, and there is a long row. He is discussing with a woman in front of him about the banks service.
Anders has continued discussing and provokes the bank robbers, but a moment later the rubber has heard Anders argument, than the rubber says to Anders that he have to be quiet. Anders continued again had not realized that the situation is seriously, and that make the robber angry and that result that the robber shot Anders in his head.
The last part of the short story is about the thoughts of Anders when the bull passes in his brain. The reader heard what he thoughts about and what he didn’t. For example he didn’t thought about his family and not about his lover in his life. But he thought about a special period in summer where a boy who played with had made a grammatical mistake. The boy says “they is” instead of” there is”, it was the last thing he remembers and stuck in his head.
Svar #1
21. januar 2007 af Katrine (Slettet)
"Det er en amerikasnk novelle skrevet af Tobiasl Wolf og udgivet i 1995. Historien er om en bog ved navn Anders, og bogen er kritiker.
Anders er midaldrende og han står ved banken og der er en lang række. Han diskuterer med en dame foran ham omkring bankerne service.
Anders har blevet ved med at diskutere og provokerer bank røverne, men et øjeblik senere har viskelæderet hørt Anders argument, end viskelæderet siger til Anders at han bliver nødt til at være stille. Anders fortsatte igen have ikke opdaget at situationen er alvorlig og det gør røveren sur og det resulterer i at røveren skød Anders i sit hoved.
Den sidste del af novellen er omkring Anders' tanker da kuglen passerer i hans hjerne. Læseren hørte hvad han tanker omkring og hvad han ikke. For eksempel han ikke tanke på hans familie og ikke på hans elsker i hans liv. Men han tænkte på en speciel periode i sommers hvor en dreng som spillede med have lavet en grammatisk fejl. Drengen siger "De er" i stedet for "der er", det var den sidste ting han husker og stak i hans hoved."
Det er rent faktisk, hvad du har skrevet. Nu kan du nemt lokalisere fejlene, og komme med bud på rettelser.
Anders er midaldrende og han står ved banken og der er en lang række. Han diskuterer med en dame foran ham omkring bankerne service.
Anders har blevet ved med at diskutere og provokerer bank røverne, men et øjeblik senere har viskelæderet hørt Anders argument, end viskelæderet siger til Anders at han bliver nødt til at være stille. Anders fortsatte igen have ikke opdaget at situationen er alvorlig og det gør røveren sur og det resulterer i at røveren skød Anders i sit hoved.
Den sidste del af novellen er omkring Anders' tanker da kuglen passerer i hans hjerne. Læseren hørte hvad han tanker omkring og hvad han ikke. For eksempel han ikke tanke på hans familie og ikke på hans elsker i hans liv. Men han tænkte på en speciel periode i sommers hvor en dreng som spillede med have lavet en grammatisk fejl. Drengen siger "De er" i stedet for "der er", det var den sidste ting han husker og stak i hans hoved."
Det er rent faktisk, hvad du har skrevet. Nu kan du nemt lokalisere fejlene, og komme med bud på rettelser.
Svar #2
22. januar 2007 af lith (Slettet)
It is an American short story written by Tobias Wolf and was published in 1995. The story is about a book called Anders, and the book is critic. Anders is middle age and is standing in a long row at the bank. He is discussing with a woman in front of him about the banks service.
Anders has continued discussing and provokes the bank robbers, but a moment later the rubber has heard Anders argument, then the rubber said to Anders that he have to be quiet. Anders continued again he had not realized that the situation is seriously, and that make the robber angry which result that the robber shot Anders'head.
The last part of the short story is about the thoughts of Anders when the bull passes in his brain. The reader hear what he thinks about and what he didn’t think about. For example he didn’t think about his family and about his lover. But he thought about a special period in summer where a boy who played with him had made a grammatical mistake. The boy said “they is” instead of” there is”, it was the last thing he remembers and the last that stuck in his head.
Anders has continued discussing and provokes the bank robbers, but a moment later the rubber has heard Anders argument, then the rubber said to Anders that he have to be quiet. Anders continued again he had not realized that the situation is seriously, and that make the robber angry which result that the robber shot Anders'head.
The last part of the short story is about the thoughts of Anders when the bull passes in his brain. The reader hear what he thinks about and what he didn’t think about. For example he didn’t think about his family and about his lover. But he thought about a special period in summer where a boy who played with him had made a grammatical mistake. The boy said “they is” instead of” there is”, it was the last thing he remembers and the last that stuck in his head.
Svar #3
22. januar 2007 af Katrine (Slettet)
Ja okay.. du kan da også vælge at bare skrive det samme igen. Synes nu ellers, at mit tidligere indlæg var super god hjælp-til-selvhjælp. Suit yourself.
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