Eng.oversættelse

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Den danske version:

Familien Harrison bor lidt udenfor Hastings i England. Familien består af hr. Harrison, som er forretningsmand, fru Harrison, som er husmoder og deres to børn Jennifer og Martin.
Jennifer er den ældste af de to, hun er femten år og går på den lokale udelte skole (comp.school), som er gratis. Hun har valgt fagene mat. Og bio., fordi hun mener, det vil være mest praktisk for hende senere i livet. Det er nemlig hendes stor ønske at blive dyrlæge – hun elsker dyr – hun har selv en hund, den hedder Plim, og en hest.
Martin er seks år yngre end hende. Han går på en privat skole, en forberedelsesskole, fordi han skal på Rugby, en af de berømte engelske Public School. Det er egentlig en misvisende betegnelse, for Public School er netop ikke offentlige, men dyre private kostskoler for drenge, hvor det er meget svært at komme ind. Mange fædre ønsker, at deres sønner skal gå på den samme berømte kostskole som de gjorde, da de var drenge. Hr. Harrison gik på Rugby. Den
forberedelsesskole Martin går på, ligger et stykke vej fra deres hjem, og det er lidt besværligt for dem at få ham i skole hver dag. Hr. Harrison kører ham i bil om morgenen, om eftermiddagen må han tage toget.

Den engelske oversættelse:

The Harrison family lives right outside to Hastings in England.
The family consists of Mr. Harrison, who is businessman, Miss Harrison who is housewife and their children. Jennifer is the eldest of the two; She’s fifteen years old and goes to the local comprehensive school, which is free. She has chosen the subjects mathematics and biology, course she thinks that it would be most practical for her later in life. It’s her great wish to become a veterinary surgeon – she loves animals. She self has a dog; his name is Plim, and a horse.
Martin is six years younger than her. He goes to a private school, a preparatory school course he’s going to Rugby, one of the famous English Public Schools. It’s actually a misleading appellation; course Public Schools is just not public, but expensive private boarding/public schools for boys, where it is very difficult to get in. Many fathers wish that their sons should go to the same famous public school, like they did when they were boys. Mr. Harrison went to Rugby. The prep school Martin goes to is located some distance from their home, and it’s quite difficult for them, to get him in school every day. Mr. Harrison drives him in car in the morning at the afternoon he has got to take the train.


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