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17. april 2007 af PigeStudie (Slettet)
Nogen der har tid til at rette min engelsk for grammatiske fejl`? På forhånd tak

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Howard is the main character in the story called “The Murderer”, written by Julian Symons. Howard is fifty-three years old, just become a widower. One of his values was he enjoyed sports programmes, like drama, family or anything historical. It inform us that this is a normal person, there is notting strange about it, but on the other hand.

Howard is an extremely hygienic. Every night he washed up after eating and then used the vacuum cleaner. He never took food into the levingroom, for fear of leaving crums. This is unusual and abnormal behaviour to be so hysterical clean.

This weak character tried to understand why his wife was dead, all this tragedy was still unreal. Howard´s son and neighbours they to help him trough his crisis, but he rejects and resent their help, he thinks they are interfering, which I can understand. He is in a desperate situation and just wants to be left alone. In this moment, he is very sad and angry.
Howard found some love letters and jewellery in a drawer. He learns of wife´s (Ellen) affair. He gets angrier and somehow betrayed.

Throughout the story, Howard is confused about the letters and someway he felt disappointed. Howard become lonelier than before, he had no friends and his only family was his son, which he was relieved to see he left.
Howard had a dirty dream about Ellen.

He dreams about Ellen how she do it with everybody. In the beginning of the story, Howard met a young prostitute girl, this chocked him, because it wasn’t far away from his house, he never realised that it was near.
In the ending of the story he had an obsessed for small girls. He seek after this young girl He became an unusual person.

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Svar #1
17. april 2007 af Mimical (Slettet)

Jeg har kigget lidt på det og rettet lidt. Se http://peecee.dk/?id=40235
Det er mit forslag til ændringer, jeg er ikke engelsk ekspert, men mest til matematik.

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17. april 2007 af Mimical (Slettet)

Lige en enkelt retttelse til: "but he rejects and resents their help", der er tilføjet et s til resents.

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Svar #3
17. april 2007 af Mimical (Slettet)

I øvrigt er Words ok til at fange stavefejl!

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Svar #4
18. april 2007 af Nitrogen Triiodid (Slettet)

Og grammatiske fejl

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