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The call of the wild.

Today a lot of kids are lazy and they do not work after school, and there are also a lot of kids who takes drugs and has become violent.

The Bacons family sends their son Aaron to a wilderness camp because he has started to play truant, his poetry has taken on a violent tinge and he has started to smoke a lot of pot.
After being attacked by a gang in the school parking lot, Aaron’s parents remembered hearing about a child who had had a good experience at a wilderness-therapy camp.
I think what they did towards Aaron was the right thing to do because of him being wild and rebellious.
It could also just have been a phase, and all they had to do was to sit down all three of them and talked things over and if that did not help, they should have showed him a brochure of the school and tell him that they think that it could be good for him to come away from everything in a month or a year. So he could change.
On March 31, Aaron collapsed on the trail and died in the cab of a truck, because of an ulcer.
I do not think that the staff treated Aaron with respect, if they had talked with him every time he did something wrong, and then he could have been alive today.
If they had sent him to a doctor when the heard about his stomach pain, they could have saved him.
It turned out to be tragically wrong.