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29. april 2004 af EpoLulu (Slettet)
Hej Fingersen + andre.

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Pauline Tuckers tragiske cocktail
Fra vor udsendte medarbejder

En cocktail af drinks og piller dræbte sandsynligvis popstjernen Mick Tuckers kone Pauline.
Hun blev fundet fuldstændig livløs af Mick kort før midnat, efter at hun tidligere på aftenen havde drukket spiritus og taget piller.
Mens Pauline lå døende, sov hendes to-årige datter fredeligt i værelset ved siden af.
Pauline havde ofte lovet Mick, at hun, når hun var kommet over sin nuværende krise, virkelig ville prøve at opgive whiskyen og de beroligende midler.
Mick havde somme tider været meget bekymret over sin kones drikkeri; men han havde altid været sikker på, at de i fællesskab bestemt ville kunne klare dette problem.
Paulines læge fortalte ligsynsmanden, at hun i halvandet år havde lidt alvorligt af depressioner. Hun plejede at drikke hver aften, og tit tog hun også piller. Hendes dømmekraft var som regel stærkt påvirket af denne tragiske cocktail. Ligsynsmanden besluttede, at man i betragtning af det store antal tomme pilleglas og whiskyflasker, der var blevet fundet i huset, kun kunne nå til én kendelse: Død som følge af ulykkestilfælde.

Pauline Tucker’s Tragic Cocktail
From our "udsendte medarbejder".

Probably a cocktail of drinks and pills killed pop star Mick Tucker’s wife Pauline. She was found totally lifeless shortly before midnight by Mick, after she had been drinking spirits and eaten pills. While Pauline Tucker was lying dying, her two-year old daughter slept peacefully in the room VED SIDEN AF.
Pauline had often promised Mick, that she would really try to quit the whisky and the sedative when she had passed her present crisis.
Mick had from time to time been very worried of his wife’s boozing; but he had always been sure that they definitely would be able to handle this problem together.
Pauline’s doctor told the coroner that she for the past 18 months had been suffering from serious depressions. She used to drink every night, and often she ate pills as well. Her judgmental ability was usually strongly affected by this tragic cocktail.
The coroner decided, that they despite the large number of empty pill bottles and whisky bottles, which were found in the house only could see one possible verdict: death by misadventure.

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Svar #1
29. april 2004 af darkseer (Slettet)

A cocktail of drinks and pills probably killed pop star Mick Tucker’s wife Pauline. She was found by Mike totally lifeless shortly before midnight, after she had been drinking spirits and eaten pills. While Pauline Tucker lay dying, her two-year old daughter slept peacefully in the next door room.
Pauline had often promised Mick, that when she overcame her present crisis she would really try to quit the whisky and the sedative.
From time to time Mick had been very worried about his wife’s boozing/alchol problem; but he had always been sure that they would definately be able to handle this problem together.
Pauline’s doctor told the coroner that for the past 18 months she had been suffering from serious depressions. She used to drink every night, and often she ate pills as well. Her "judgmental ability"(slå dømmekraft op) was usually strongly affected by this tragic cocktail.
The coroner decided that considering the large number of empty pill bottles and whisky bottles that were found in the house only one possible verdict could be predicted: death by "misadventure" (slå ulykke /ulykkestilfælde op).

har rettet den så godt jeg kan. er ikke ved min egen comp nu så jeg har desværre ikk mine gram. bøger eller ordbøger. men ellers flot oversat
du placere pronominerne forkert

Svar #2
29. april 2004 af EpoLulu (Slettet)

Mange tak for hjælpen. Det er lige præcis pronominernes placering der er mit største problem. Jeg sammenligner lige dine forslag med mine!
Hav en go´ aften...

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