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Rette lille opgave?

09. oktober 2007 af JonasTerp (Slettet)
Et engelsk-geni som vil rette min lille opgave, da jeg ikke selv mestrer engelsk?

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A friendship is a particular type of a relationship and a term used to denote cooperative and supportive behavior between two or more humans. In this context the term of a friendship has an importance, which includes mutual knowledge, esteem, and affection. A good friend will always value and welcome other friends’ company and show loyalty towards each other. Friends do usually have the same interests e.g. they can share their interests after school, like playing football, listening to music, drawing etc. It means that you often will be similar to your friend(s) and that you can have a lot of different friends, but some psychological theories says also that opposites can have a strong connection to each other.
A friend is someone who cares about you and loves you. You will often have something special together that no one else has. It is important for each person to have a high social intelligence because that involves the qualities: empathy, sympathy and mutual understanding. Honesty is also a main theme, which can make out whether it is a good friendship or not. If you can speak to your friend about everything even though if it is hard to speak the truth, you make sure that he is a good friend.
Thomas Volstrup is my best friend. He is my best friend because he fits the profile of what I value as a good friend. Thomas is 17 years old and lives on a farm near a small village called Dvergetved. I have known him since primary school and we have almost always been good friends. He studies at Frederikshavn Gymnasium in 2.y and in his leisure time he likes scouting, political activity and music. It means that we are very similar and we have a lot of interests to share because I study at the same place and like the same activities in my leisure time. We do also have something special together. We make up a group called “the sheep” and we have some nicknames. I am “the curly sheep” and he is “the paralyzed sheep”. We have almost the same circle of acquaintances so we share friends and have a mutual understanding of each other. When I have been in love-trouble or other problems he has always been there for me and advised me. I have done the same to him and we know that we can tell each other about anything. We have both a high social intelligence and we have empathy and sympathy. These things are the nuclear of our friendship and that is why he is my best friend.
George Bush is my worst enemy. I do not like George Bush because I do not understand his opinions as a president. I think he is heartless and that he does not have any social intelligence because he is so busy with making war. He does not fit the profile of what I think of a good friend at all. So it makes it impossible for me to like him.

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10. oktober 2007 af Erik Morsing (Slettet)

Jeg har sat mine forslag i parantes.

A friendship is a particular type of a relationship and a term used to denote cooperative and supportive behavior between two or more (human beings). In this context the term() “friendship” has an importance, which includes mutual knowledge, esteem, and affection. A good friend will always value and welcome other friends’ company and show loyalty towards each other. Friends do usually have the same interests e.g. they can share their interests after school, like playing football, listening to music, drawing etc (drawing what??).
It means that you (will often) (treat your friends in the same way) and that you can have a lot of different friends, but some psychological theories (also says) that opposites can have a strong connection (towards) each other.
A friend is someone who cares about you and (has affection for) you. You will often have something special together that no one else has. It is important for each person to have a high social intelligence because that involves the qualities: empathy, sympathy and mutual understanding. Honesty is also a main theme, which can make out whether it is a good friendship or not. If you can speak to your friend about everything even though () it is hard to speak the truth, you (can be) sure that he is a good friend.
Thomas Volstrup is my best friend. He is my best friend because he fits the profile of what I value as a good friend. Thomas is 17 years old and lives on a farm near a small village called Dvergetved. I have known him since primary school and we have almost always been good friends. He studies at Frederikshavn Gymnasium in 2.y and in his leisure time he likes scouting, political activity and music. It means that we are very similar and we have a lot of interests to share because I study at the same place and like the same activities in my leisure time. We do also have something special together. We make up a group called “the sheep” and we have some nicknames. I am “the curly sheep” and he is “the paralyzed sheep”. We have almost the same circle of acquaintances so we share friends and have a mutual understanding of each other. When I have been in love-trouble or other problems he has always been there for me and advised me. I have done the same (for) him and we know that we can (talk about anything together). We have both a high social intelligence and we have empathy and sympathy. These things are the (core in) our friendship and that is why he is my best friend.
George Bush is my worst enemy. I do not like George Bush because I do not understand his opinions as a president. I think he is heartless and that he does not have any social intelligence because he is so busy with making war. He does not (at all) fit the profile of what I think of a good friend. So it makes it impossible for me to like him.


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