Hjælp til eng??

Heysa ville høre om nogle ville kigge min engelsk aflevering igennem, da jeg ikke er så god til det, og har prøvet selv at sidde med grammatik bogen siden af.
Tak Christian

I don´t think it is an good movie, when I am not agree with his view on Global warming, but there are a lot of people who have the same view as Al Gore and thinks this is a good documentary. I just think that there is too much privacy about Al Gore’s life, for the most important in this documentary is the Global warming and not about Al Gore. I fell that Al Gore try to do with this movie is that people should feel sorry for him or something like that and then they will feel they are need to step forward and take the initiative to save our earth. For example the classic example where a polar bear trying to find somewhere to rest, but can´t find it and it drowns. And when people heard about this example, they all said “Ohhhh, how sad, we need to do something”. It will have be a better documentary if there not was so much about Al Gore and then it also will be a little shorter. But this (power point) show is very nice, it is a good design and the graphs and all the facts are clear. So this movie will probably convince a lot of people who don´t now so much about Global warming, that this is a very big problem. It is just a little bite sorry that all these facts and graphs are WRONG. Al Gore talks about that the water level will rise with 7 meter over 50 years, but FNs Climate panel talks about 6 cm.