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08. februar 2008 af
anonymanonym (Slettet)
Hey igen, er der nogen som vil læse og rette min summary igennem?
They sold my sister english summary
The storyteller is a girl named Naliki. The whole story was for 2 years ago. She has a big sister named Nyamalo and a big brother named Tumuko. It is a african family and the girls are not alowed to study but when they get circumcised they have to marry a man. Nyamalo gets married with a stranger she never met before and she have to end her school. She was forced to marry Ole Sirayo, he is rich.
Her brother dont like that his sister have to be with a stranger but her father dont want to listen to his son. Tumuka just wants her to be something in life. After the wedding she have to live with her parrents in low. Naliki goes as well. She dont want to sleep with a stranger and she rather sleep with her sister but her parents in low tells her that she has to because its her husbond now. Naliki goes home Nyamalo says that she will try loveing him.
A friend of Nalikis father Ole Timau shows up. Naliki hears that he wants to marry her. She dont want to be solld to a old man that she dont even like, her sister was forced to do. Who can save her is her brother, she wants to write to him and hope he will help her. She wants to finish her study.
They sold my sister english summary
The storyteller is a girl named Naliki. The whole story was for 2 years ago. She has a big sister named Nyamalo and a big brother named Tumuko. It is a african family and the girls are not alowed to study but when they get circumcised they have to marry a man. Nyamalo gets married with a stranger she never met before and she have to end her school. She was forced to marry Ole Sirayo, he is rich.
Her brother dont like that his sister have to be with a stranger but her father dont want to listen to his son. Tumuka just wants her to be something in life. After the wedding she have to live with her parrents in low. Naliki goes as well. She dont want to sleep with a stranger and she rather sleep with her sister but her parents in low tells her that she has to because its her husbond now. Naliki goes home Nyamalo says that she will try loveing him.
A friend of Nalikis father Ole Timau shows up. Naliki hears that he wants to marry her. She dont want to be solld to a old man that she dont even like, her sister was forced to do. Who can save her is her brother, she wants to write to him and hope he will help her. She wants to finish her study.
Svar #1
08. februar 2008 af TanteOda (Slettet)
Er det dig selv, der har formuleret denne summary? I så fald her lidt drys:
- "It is a african family."
> "an", for næste ord starter med en vokal.
- "and the girls are not alowed"
> stavefejl på alowed
- "Nyamalo gets married with a stranger she never met before"
> Nyamalo marries a stranger she has never met...
- and she have to end her school
> has to (som du har brugt før). He/she/it has.
- Her brother dont like that
> mangler noget ved "dont" som sammentrækning. Ellers kan du vælge at skrive det ud fx: "do not"
- Her brother dont like that his sister have to be with a stranger but her father dont want to listen to his son.
> Mangler kommasætning
- Tumuka just wants her to be something in life
> Hvem er Tumuka, er det broderen? Så skriv det ind i sætningen ovenover.
- After the wedding she have to live with her parrents in low.
> se forrige pkt omkring has. + "low" er forkert stavet. Gælder også længere nede.
- Naliki goes as well.
> Hvem er Naliki, og hvor går hun hen?
- She dont want to sleep with a stranger
> dont er forkert. Gælder også længere nede.
- because its her husbond now
> mangler noget i sammentrækningen "its" ellers kan du også skrive "it is" og "husbond" findes ikke på engelsk.
- Naliki goes home Nyamalo says that she will try loveing him.
> Mystisk sætning.. mangler noget... + ordet "loveing" findes ikke... tror du skal fjerne e´et.
- "She dont want to be solld"
> igen mangler sammentrækning noget (gælder også længere nede) og ordet "solld" findes ikke. her mangler måske et e.
- "to a old man"
> Hvad var der lige med den der vokal i næste ord...?
TanteOda
- "It is a african family."
> "an", for næste ord starter med en vokal.
- "and the girls are not alowed"
> stavefejl på alowed
- "Nyamalo gets married with a stranger she never met before"
> Nyamalo marries a stranger she has never met...
- and she have to end her school
> has to (som du har brugt før). He/she/it has.
- Her brother dont like that
> mangler noget ved "dont" som sammentrækning. Ellers kan du vælge at skrive det ud fx: "do not"
- Her brother dont like that his sister have to be with a stranger but her father dont want to listen to his son.
> Mangler kommasætning
- Tumuka just wants her to be something in life
> Hvem er Tumuka, er det broderen? Så skriv det ind i sætningen ovenover.
- After the wedding she have to live with her parrents in low.
> se forrige pkt omkring has. + "low" er forkert stavet. Gælder også længere nede.
- Naliki goes as well.
> Hvem er Naliki, og hvor går hun hen?
- She dont want to sleep with a stranger
> dont er forkert. Gælder også længere nede.
- because its her husbond now
> mangler noget i sammentrækningen "its" ellers kan du også skrive "it is" og "husbond" findes ikke på engelsk.
- Naliki goes home Nyamalo says that she will try loveing him.
> Mystisk sætning.. mangler noget... + ordet "loveing" findes ikke... tror du skal fjerne e´et.
- "She dont want to be solld"
> igen mangler sammentrækning noget (gælder også længere nede) og ordet "solld" findes ikke. her mangler måske et e.
- "to a old man"
> Hvad var der lige med den der vokal i næste ord...?
TanteOda
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