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31. marts 2008 af SaShADKK (Slettet)
hey!

jeg har et lille tekststykke som jeg gerne vil have rettet, både gramatisk og komma. hvis der er en der vil kigge det igennem, vil jeg være meget taknemlig!

I can’t say that there is one music-art I like. I have a wide music taste. But heavy rock isn’t my taste. I don’t like songs there the front singer just screaming and don’t tell anything, because I don’t learn anything and that kind of songs just make me frustrated. I can imagine that heavy rock is the right music if you are very angry and just want to destroy something. That kind of music is just not my kind of taste.

The lyrics are important to me. The song must have a theme or a message. The song must tell me something I can learn from. The songs can be sad or fun – or bough! If the front singer is a woman must she possess a very beautiful voice e.g. Laura from x-factor. I thing she has a really beautiful voice and she make me almost crying! If the front singer is a man must he possess a really special and beautiful voice e.g. Shayne Ward. He has a really special and very beautiful voice, sometimes he sounds like a woman when he reaches the high tones. Love songs is also important to me, I really like love songs. Shayne Ward’s songs is only love songs and right now I really love his songs, but that is not because of the lyrics, it is because his voice is sow amazing and I really like the music. Sow the song must have: a good lyric, a theme, a message, something I can learn from, sad, fun, beautiful voice, special voice, most love songs or ballade, and good music. Sow pop, ballade or rock is my favourite kind of music.

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31. marts 2008 af Bruger slettet (Slettet)

Her er mit forslag. Jeg tror ikke man i de her forumposter rent typografisk kan vise, hvori ændringerne består? Hvis man kan, har jeg ikke gennemskuet hvordan, man gør :) Men det kan man i Word, og hvis du vil have min Word-fil, hvor man kan se rettelserne, så send mig en besked med din email-adresse, så sender jeg dig en mail med vedhæftet Word-fil.

Fint, hvis nogen med større engelskkundskaber end jeg vil øje teksten igennem én gang til :) Fx ved jeg ikke så meget om kommatering på engelsk. Jeg er matematisk-naturvidenskabelig student :) Og så ser friske øjne altid mere ...

Men her er mit forslag:

My taste of music is broad. I can’t say I prefer one music genre for another. I like rock, but heavy rock isn’t my taste. I detest when the front singer is just screaming and don’t tell anything, because I don’t learn anything and that kind of songs just frustrate me. I can imagine that heavy rock is the right music if you are very angry and just want to destroy something. That kind of music is just not my kind of taste.

The lyrics are important to me. The song must have a theme or a message. The song must tell something I can learn from. The songs may be sad or fun – or both! If the front singer is a woman she must possess a very beautiful voice e.g. Laura from x-factor. I think she has a really beautiful voice and she almost makes me cry! If the front singer is a man he must possess a really special and beautiful voice e.g. Shayne Ward. He has a really special and very beautiful voice, when he hits the high notes he sometimes sounds like a woman. Love songs are important to me too, I really like love songs. Shayne Ward’s songs are all love songs and at the moment I really fancy his songs, not because of the lyrics but because his voice is so amazing and I adore the music. So the song must have: a good lyric, a theme, a message, something I can learn from, sad, fun, beautiful voice, special voice, most love songs or ballades, and good music. So pop, ballades or rock are my favourite music genres.

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