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Hjælp til grammatik

31. marts 2008 af Eagle-Eye (Slettet)
Følgende tekst er skrevet - hvis der skulle befinde sig grammatiske fejl, må Du meget give et hint.

"The stem cells are very useful for the scientists. From embryos produced in a lab, they can make them create stem cells that carry a specific genetic disease which is responsible for neurological conditions (for instance; motor neurone disease). Then by converting the stem cells into neurons, they will be able to clear up how the disease works, in order to produce a drug that puts a stop on the damaging of the body. As I mentioned before, I think it is okay to use animals (humans as well) in order to find a treatment but the ethical conscience still has to be pampered."

På forhånd mange tusind tak - håber virkelig på hjælp

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Svar #1
31. marts 2008 af Xyxoz (Slettet)

Er ikke sikker på, om du kan sige "that puts a stop ON the..." skriv evt. istedet "... in order to produce a drug that prevents any further harm of the body".

Svar #2
31. marts 2008 af Eagle-Eye (Slettet)

Ja, det har du nok ret i - det beskriver lidt bedre min mening.

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