Grammatik :)

Hej med jer. Kan I hjælpe mig med at rette min grammatik og mine formuleringer.

På forhånd tak:) Håber I kan hjælpe mig.

Does love conquer all?

I think that love is wonderful feeling. Love begins between two people who show their love to each other mutually. Love comes by itself, if you find the right person. Love can be many things. You can have love for girlfriend, family, friends, animals or anything else. Love overcomes everything. Life is love, love, life, and without this wonderful state, then there are not many good experiences in life.

Fatima and saret
Fatima and saret should not marry because they come from two different nationalities. Fatima has a Turkish background, while saret is Combodja. Turkish girls can not be with or marry a non Muslim, including we are told that girls are weak and can not pursue Islam. She will force's engagement when she is married, but she can not provide force. I do not think that love can overcome this history, because then the non-Muslim boy circumcised, and belong to the Muslim Brotherhood. Since Fatima is taking his father's control, I do not believe in that love overcomes in her case.

Thebedi and Paul
In this story we are witnessing apartheid. Apartheid is a policy of segregation between whites and colored people, which was founded and practiced in South Africa. I think that Thebedi playing with Paulus' feelings. I think that this love is not overcome, since they both are not serious in their relationship and then I think it is not true love.

Romeo and Juliet
Is about two young people who meet and love themselves. Past tense morality and family feuds are to blame in that they are prohibited to be seen. They are very in love that they defy the ban and meet in secret and passionate. It ends sad, because after many hardships they both die a tragic death. I think it is true love, that the sacrifice in death, so they can come together.