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The waste land
”The Waste land” is a short story written by Alan paton the story starts in media res
The story is about a man who goes out at a bus then two young boys were waiting under the three. It was to late to run after the bus, the man said, but he was afraid,he tells his heart was pounding in his breast they young men wanted his wages, he could feel the young men walking towards him and he was very afraid he tells he was afraid of his wife will be a widow and his children fatherless . the man goes on the other side of the road to the waste land he felt that that was his only hope. but the young men follow him the men grab a stick and hit a man to the ground. After that he ran a bit and then he hide under a lorry the young men called Freddy is there’s friend name he dosnt answered he was dead and the two young boys ran away after that the man came over to the boy he had killed and found out it was his own son and then he said people arise! The world is dead
Svar #1
30. oktober 2008 af KurdiDK (Slettet)
1. Husk dine punktumer!
2. Du hopper fra nutid til datid - pas på med det! Enten vælger du at skrive i datid eller nutid. Sørg for at rette dem.
Jeg vælger ikke at rette dine fejl - det er din læres pligt ;)
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Dog enkelte fejl, jeg ikke kan holde for mig selv:
"Deres" = "their" og ikke there's
"Doesn't", og ikke "dosnt" - Hvis du har svært ved at sammensætte, så skriv dem for dem selv, altså: "Does not"
"Dead" er et substantiv og "die" et verbum. Du må endelig ikke forveksle disse to.
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Selv tak ;)
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