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Nogen der gider rette det her lille stykke for grammatik fejl?

The sellers, who sell all the necessary kit for a backpacker, earn a lot of money. In the second text we hear about the coffee shops. These kinds of people, who own those coffee shops, are targeting the backpackers. Any kind of tourism is a chance for the shop owners to earn a lot of money, so you can get a good benefit. You can also take it from another angel. Actually the backpackers get the greatest benefit; it could be all the new experiences, the new people they meet, the different cultures and stuff like that. You can also say that Mark Moxon benefits from backpacking with the experiences he gets on his travelling.
The fourth text, “Video Night in Kathmandu”, by Pico Iyer, separates itself from the other texts, as it describes the local people’s benefits from backpackers. The locals utilize the tourist so they can get a job and earn money.