Engelsk
Engelskstil ok ?
Hej Allesammen ,
Er der nogen der gider og måske den engelsk stil , jeg ville være evig taknemmelig , og siger på tusind tak for hjælpen .
25 Ogitumbo Road
Bolum
South Africa
January 29
Dear Lisa
Thank you so much the Email you sent me , yes I am in South Africa right now , I would hope you was whit me . but it is you not , There are happen many things down here . I live whit the family called chiwauva they are very sweet to me , they have 6 children . so there should some food on the table , I have been here twenty days now and I must take home about ten days , one of the first day I been should I help
”Save the Children” we was out whit some food and we help also with medical care , it was scary to see how families lived and how little they got to eat.
Next day I travel round In Africa , I have pay 50 pound for at came on a guided tour . You should have been on that it was amazing beautiful. First take we out in the jungle where we see a leopard family , they were incredibly tame next we see some monkeys we get a chance to feeding them with our hands . It was a great experience and see the jungle. After we have see the jungle , we came on a boat were we should see some dolphins we get a chance to jump in the water it was only me who dared , you could cuddle them . The trip made a big impression on me . after the trip with the dolphins I come back to the chiwauva family . The following day helped I ”Save the Children” to build some house again there was overthrown by a hurricane , when you see the situation down there find you out of they needs help. Now I hat not so many days back here , but today I will help the family chiwauva and reaping and cleaning of their animals . but here at end I will say I hope really we can meet each other more back in London . we could maybe go on a vacation together?.
Yours,
Peter
Svar #1
03. februar 2009 af iloveshoes (Slettet)
Thank you so much for the email that you sent me, yes I am in South Africa right now, and I was hoping that you could be with me. But iyou are not. Many things happened down here. I live with a family called Chiwauva, they are very sweet to me. They have 6 children, so there must be f, I have been here be food for everyone.I have been here for 20 days now and I must go home in about ten days. One of my first days here, I was helping
”Save the Children”. We were out with some food and medical care. It was scary to see how families lived and how little they had to eat.
Next day I traveled around in Africa, and i paid 50 pounds to come on a guided tour. You should have been with me, because is was amazingly beautiful. First we went out in the jungle, where we saw a leopard family, they were incredibly tame. Then we saw some monkeys. We got a chance to feed them with our hands . It was a great experience to see the jungle. After we saw the jungle, we went on a boat were we were suppoused to see some dolphins. We had a chance to jump in the water. It was only me who dared. You could cuddle them the dolphins. The trip made a big impression on me. After the trip with the dolphins I came back to the Chiwauva family. The following day I helped ”Save the Children” with building houses. The place was overthrown by a hurricane again. When you see the situation down there, you realise that they need help. After all this, there wasn't many days left. But today I will help the family Chiwauva by reaping and cleaning their animals. But now at the end, I want you to know that I really hope we can see each other more back in London. Maybe we should go on a holiday together?
Jeg har rettet hele stykket til dig, og der er nogle ting som jeg har aendret da det loed forkert i sammnhaengen. Du skal laere datid i engelsk, og pas paa med at skrive dansk-engelsk!! Fordi dine ordstillinger er MEGET dansk-engelske! Du skal ogsaa huske komma og punktum fordi dine saetninger bliver aalt for lange og ikke giver mening til sidst.
Held og lykke :-)
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