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Deadline tomorrow morning. plz Help!

21. april 2009 af Helpmeplease (Slettet)

Jeg håber i kan hjælpe os med at rette den nedenstående tekst.

Den skal afleveres imorgen kl. 10.00
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I have chosen to establish a car garage. There is great demand for auto repair shops in Denmark, so I think it is a good time to start a garage near where I live. I plan to launch the company next year, after I discussed everything with my bank. I will negotiate with mortgage companies regarding purchase of the property. I differently need capital to purchase property with ongoing activities, and the daily operation of the company.

There will be recruited two mechanics to start with. If everything is progressing successful and there is great demand, there will be recruited more auto mechanics. It is a personal business. And I will share with my other relatives. The garage will be located in Copenhagen. I find the place very completive.

Company CSC has a lot of equipment for cars. The employees will be trained how to use the technologies items in the firm. There will be held meetings frequently. Before starting company I will introduce my employees the policy in the firm and how to work hard and live up to the requirements.

I hope my plans will be realized during the next year. It requires a great deal and it is hard when you are one to start a business up. I have chosen to locate my workshop in Copenhagen, and I hope there will be many customers.

If your car isn't working or are there something is broken in your car, then you are welcome to my car garage.

 

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Ha` en god dag!

Camilla
 


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Svar #1
21. april 2009 af rakijovic

"Ha' en god dag!" siger pigen kl. 21.40.... Jaja.... ;)

Spøg til side, C. Jeg har set din tekst igennem -- tjek indbakken. :o)

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Svar #2
21. april 2009 af Helpmeplease (Slettet)

hehe...Tak


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