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hjælp!
Hej.. Jeg skal til prøve imorgen i engelsk.. og jeg håber at nogen gider og læse, min engelsk og rette den lidt og tilføje nogle ting.. det vil være en stor hjælp :)
Tak på forhånd :D
Why did I choose this topic?
I have chosen to talk about the World Trade Center. I come from Turkey, where they are fighting against a terrorist organization called PKK, so I know little about terrorism. Two boys from my class has presented about the World Trade Center in English class and
showed a video that really changed my perspective, the United States. Since that day, I have studied it and tried to find out more about what happened that day and suddenly it became a hobby for me. I have also seen some movies that have changed much. "World Trade Center, United 93"
What is WTC?
World trade center were a big financial workplace for many people.
World Trade Center consisted of seven buildings, but the two famous buildings were twins Towers
They were built from 1966 to 1972 and designed by Minoru Yamasaki. The buildings consisted of 110 floors. height: 527.9 m.. World Trade Center was located in Central Plaza in New York
What happened on September the 11th 2001?
11 September 2001, four airplanes were kidnapped by 28 terrorists who used airplanes as bombs. 2 of flights were crashed into the twin towers. and one in the Pentagon and one crashed in a field. It is not the first time that World Trade Center was been under terrorist attacks in 1993, a bombe missed in the garage
Who did it and why?
Many people believe it was Al Qaeda that was behind the terrorist attack, but they have denied it and the 28 men who were involved have nothing to do with al-Qaeda mener de
Results and Consequences?.
The former præsentent sent American soldiers into Iraq after d 11 September 2001. 2750 is the death toll since 2007.
hvis nogen der gider og sige hvorfor AL-qaeda gjor det?
tak :)
Svar #1
18. juni 2009 af Xyxoz (Slettet)
Jeg vil give dig nogle omformuleringsforslag. Jeg garanterer ikke, at de er 100% grammatisk korrekte, men de er ment som betydelige forbedringer ;)
Ville hellere sige "I'm from Turkey" istedet for "I come from Turkey"
I sætningen med two boys er lidt fejl, og du kunne istedet skrive "In a recent English class, two of my classmates showed a video about the World Trade Center, which really changed my perspective"
Ved ikke lige hvad du mener med ", the United States" - "my perspective on the United States"?
"and suddenly it became a hobby for me" lyder som om du lige pludselig fandt på det - du kunne måske skrive "and it quickly became a hobby for me"
"What happened on September the 11th 2001?" - "What happened on September 11, 2001?"
"11 September 2001" - "On September 11, 2001"
"Were kidnapped"? du mener nok "were hijacked" ;)
"2 of flights were crashed into the twin towers. and one in the Pentagon and one crashed in a field." - "Two of the planes crashed into the twin towers, one into the Pentagon and one crashed in a field"
"It is not the first time that World Trade Center was been under terrorist attacks in 1993, a bombe missed in the garage" - "It's not the first time that the World Trade Center has been attacked by terrorists. In 1993, a bomb missed" .. in the garage?
"The former preæsentent" du mener vel "The former president"?
"d 11 September 2001" - "September 11, 2001"
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