hjælp til aflevering!

hej, jeg er igang med en aflevering til imorgen om mobning, og ville høre om der er en som er sød og rette den her lille del før mig (:
det som er forkert, vil jeg gerne vide hvad det helt præcist er jeg har gjort galt (:

I have self been the bully, for four years ago I bullied a girl from my old class. I have always liked her, but in 7-grade, I started to bully her, because everybody else did it.
I just wanted respect from my friends, and for some reason I felt ashamed of myself and my body, I had really low-self-esteem, and I just felt like I didn’t fit in. I know it was one of the reasons why I bullied her.
After the “incident” I started to talk with some other girls in my class, and surprisingly we had a lot in common, I found my “place” in the class and after that I stopped bulling the girl.
I have never bullied someone since, and I will never do it again. I think it’s pathetic and childish. I would lie if I said, I had I good reason to bully her because I didn’t.
I just said the same bad things about her and to her, like they did. I truly regret what I did, and I know I ruined her time in 7-grade, but the past is the past, I cannot chance it. I have promised to myself that I’ll never bully someone again because I do know how it feels, to not be good enough, and feel like you don't fit in.


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