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The only people, who know about Aicha’s powers, are her human family, and that is only because her human “mother” is her aunt. She lived with her human family for 15 years, before she disappeared. Only few people have seen her after she disappeared, some means she lives in a cave and other means she is death, but no one knows where she is or where she lives. A year after she disappeared and got a new identity, the number of accidents all over the world started to fall. People are being rescued of/by a superwoman, it could be Aicha? But it is very mysterious.
The last time she was seen, was in North Italia, in the forbidden Forrest. She is the source to the La’vi’s powers; she was born to protect all lives on Averus and Gaia, and protect Averus against Sherlock the Hunter. According to the legend, Sherlock the Hunter is her brother, but no one knows if it is true, but could it be true that the enemy and the hero are related to each other? Or it is just a rumor that remains a secret. Something, which is true, is that all lives on the two planets lie in her hands.
If she dies, all lives on Averus and Earth will die.
 

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