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Hilsen Caroline
skal besvare følgende spørgsmål: what is your topic? - why did you choosethis particular topic, what is interesting?
what is your focus and what text ...
In my AT project, I had chosen the subject Danish (A) and Psychology (C), and my topic is: Freud and his theories, but also the drama “Vildanden” by the Danish writer Henrik Ibsen.
My focus is more specifically Freud’s theories and his personality model, but also his emphasis of humanity. Furthermore is it interesting to see how his theories becoming clear in the literature, and that’s why I had chosen the drama “Vildanden” by Henrik Ibsen.
I choose this particular topic, because I think it is an interesting theme. What is interesting about it is, these theories Freud has about the human, and also because a lot of authors use his theories in their literature perhaps not consciously.
The next thing I’m going to do is, to write it all into an “AT-assignment” with context, and make sure that my issues are good enough.
Svar #1
15. marts 2010 af Andersen11 (Slettet)
Sædvanligvis betragtes Henrik Ibsen da som en norsk forfatter, født i Skien i Norge i 1828, hvor Danmark ikke længere var i union med Norge.
Svar #3
15. marts 2010 af Stygotius (Slettet)
In my AT project, I (had)have chosen the subject Danish (A) and Psychology (C), and my topic is: Freud and his theories, but also the drama “Vildanden” by the (Danish) Norwegian (writer) playwright Henrik Ibsen.
My focus is more specifically Freud’s theories and his personality model, but also his emphasis (of) on humanity. Furthermore is it interesting to see how his theories have become(ing) clear???? in (the) literature, and that’s why I (had) have(chosen) taken the drama “Vildanden” by Henrik Ibsen to be my subject..
(I choose this particular topic,) I have done this because I think it is an interesting theme. What is interesting about it is(,) the(se) theories that Freud has about (the) human nature, and also (because a lot of authors) the fact that many other writers use his theories in their (literature) writing although perhaps not consciously.
The next thing I’m going to do is, to write it all into an “AT-assignment” with context, and make sure that my issues are good enough. .
Den sidste sætning er noget barnekammervrøvl som du ikke skal skrive.
Du skal gøre dig klart at et skriftsprog ikke et sludrende snakkesprog, men skal være meget mere præcist g klart.........
Svar #4
15. marts 2010 af Camen (Slettet)
Okay. tak for dine rettelser.
Jeg er ikke god til engelsk generelt, så når jeg får kritik tager jeg det ret personligt, idet jeg virkelig forsøger. Også er der en grund til, at jeg beder om hjælp til at få det jeg skriver rettet herinde.
Hilsen Caroline
Svar #5
16. marts 2010 af Stygotius (Slettet)
Det er ikke kun det engelske som er et problem med denne tekst.
På dansk ville det heller ikke have været en god tekst. Du nævner et utal af gange at du har valgt dette emne fordi.......... osv. osv. og du gentager en ting mange gange og kører rundt og rundt i ring uden at sige noget overhovedet.
Du giver som grund til dit valg af emne at det er et interessant emne; -ja, -det kan man jo nok tænke sig. Ellers ville du vel ikke have valgt det. Det er bare tomme ord og fyld og ikke andet.
Generelt virker det meget barnligt i en stil at skrive ting som "Nu vil jeg fortælle det, og derpå vil jeg gøre det og til sidst vil jeg slutte med........." Det kan enhver læser vel nok selv se. Drop det, og skriv bare det du skal om emnet.
Det er det jeg mener når jeg snakker om "sludrende snakkesprog".
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