Grammar Revision Verber

Hey guys and girls.

Jeg har brug for lidt hjælp og rettelse til nogle engelske sætninger jeg skal oversætte, så det ville være super fedt hvis i ville fortælle om jeg har rettet korrekt og kommet med korrekt rette-grund.

1) The manager of the three films are in town

min rettelse: The manager of the three films is in town

Grund : 3 person nutid

2) It is not everybody that are able to see the point

Min:  It is not everybody who are able to see the point

(jeg er ret meget på bar bund her :S)

3) The old man livs on the cabin on the east

Min:  The old man lives on the cabin on the east

Stavefejl.

4: The babies cryed a lot.

Min:  The babies cried a lot 

Y bliver til ie hvis det står efter en konsonant

5: Did you know that the principal not wants students in the staff room ?

Min:  Did you know that the principal does not want students in the staff room?

mangler udsagnsled i anden halvdel af sætningen... i really need help there :b

6: Paper is burning at 451 F

Paper is burning at 451 degrees F

Missing link... Er på bar bund hvad det hedder.

7: The street was highly trafikked

Min: The street was highly trafficated

Stavefejl

8: Miss Kidman is staring in "The Others"

Min: Miss Kidman is staring at "The Others"

.....

9:  The teacher says that the assignment shall be on her desk tomorrow 

Min: .... Ved ikke :S

Ja.. som i nok kan se er jeg ikke vildt god til engelsk :S men håber der er nogen der kan hjælpe og forklare.. På forhånd tak :)