er dette en redegørelse?

hej alle sammen jeg skal skrive en redegørelse med ved ik helt hvordan ... fandt en eksempel på nettet men er ikke helt sikker på om det er en redegørelse :

The socialworker Stephen Bentley is paying the Khan family a visit. It is not the first time the authorities visit their home, but they has returned once again because they needs Mr. Khan to be around as well. Their reason for coming is their little daughter, Shareen Khan. She is handicapped and the social services department what her to attend a school for disabled children. Mr. Bentley suggests that she attends this school because she will not be able to keep up with the normal children. The mother is not interested in having her child attending a special school; she wants her to attend a public school like her brother and every other regular child. The son Hassan is home from school in order to translate and he also has the role of father of the house. The reason for the father’s absence is that he doesn’t agree with his wife. He has realized that their daughter will never be able to read or write as well as other children. He stayed away from the meeting, just so that he will not have to confront his wife the facts of his disagreements. The mother sticks to her point of view and Mr. Bentley will have to leave the house without having achieved anything. He was not able to neither convince the mother to change her point of view nor convince Hassan to speak up to his mother. He leave empty-handed and schedule another meeting where maybe the father will appear. They are back to square one.

så mit spørgmål lyder : er denne tekst en redegørelse? (jeg skal IKKE kopire, det er fordi jeg aldrig har lavet en redegørelse før så jeg vil bare gerne hjælpes på vej med et eksempel) ... og et sidste spørgsmål : er det en god ide med en indledning og afslutning? :)

på forhåndt tusind tak