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This study investigates immigration in USA and Denmark. It answers questions about immigration problems, different views on immigration, and which kind of immigration strategy the countries are making use of. Trough this study is used the comparative method, why the USA and Denmark constantly is compared to each other. There is also making used of the analyses method in two English articles, which are about the immigrations problems in USA. To support the immigration strategy, and its consequences, is used two sociology scientists’ theories.
In this study it’s shown that the immigration problem is different from USA and Denmark. In USA they’re struggling with illegal immigrants, who are taking jobs from the citizens, which result in a going down economy in the American state. In Denmark the problem is that the immigrant doesn’t fell welcome, and as a part of the society. And therefore they become criminals or isolate themselves together with other immigrants, where they feel accepted. The immigrants look at Denmark, is quite negative. They think it’s a fine country, but that the Danes is traditionally, and not that extroverted as the Americans. What immigrants think about USA is that it’s that everyone can make it in the USA. At last the study found out that the views on the countries is connected to the way the immigration is going on. In Denmark immigrations almost have to give up their personally characteristics, if they want to be a part of the Danish society. In USA you can look like you want to and always become an American, it’s easy just to melt into the society and be a part of it. In the end it looks like USA is a more attractive country to be immigrated in, than Denmark is. But lets not forget that the USA is a big melting pot of different people, and beside it’s not such an old country as Denmark, which makes the reasons for non-traditionally society in the USA.