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Hej Har set filmen "Mickybo and Me", vi skulle så skrive hvad vi tror der vil ske med dem gennem 30år.
Har rettet den, men er der nogle der alligevel vil se på den?
På forhånd tak
I think this happen during this 30 year:
The bridge is spear and the Catholics can’t get over to the protest. That creates more had between them, and Mickybo hade the protest even more then before. He partner in many demonstration and he get in prison about 2-4 time. On his 15 birthday his mother dead of desperation. He and his sisters don’t know to do, because before his mother worked. So Mickybo and his two oldest sisters get a job, and they move to a little opportunity. When he was 22 he leaves alone. He deceit too go to Australia, that had been hiss dream since he were 9. But he didn’t have the money to flay to Australia. He gets in loved with a catholic girl from France. They get married. But one day he soddenly thinks about Johnjo. He finds his address and wrote a letter.
Johnjo study and his mother work all the day so they cunt survive. That’s not safe like before at the protest side. One day after school, a catholic shout him. He were in coma 1 mouth. His mother was a afraid, so they moved to the country. He’s mother marriage to a man farmer, she was so happy. He finishes school and travel to Australia. He builds his own farm with horses. Sometimes he actual think about, the adventure with Mickybo.
Svar #1
30. januar 2011 af gleefan (Slettet)
Hej vil lige sige at du har nogle stavefejl soddenly er ikke med o, det er suddenly. I overskriften er der også nogle fejl, i think this will happen during the next 30 years.
Svar #3
30. januar 2011 af rakijovic
Du kegler rundt mellem præteritum (datid) og præsens (nutid). Vælg en tid og hold dig til dén.
Der et desuden hav af danismer og anden Danglish. Fx hedder 'had' ikke heeelt det samme på engelsk, ej heller 'at hade'). Det er farligt at vælge engelske ord der "lyder" som det du gerne vil sige på dansk -- 'shout' betyder ikke 'at skyde', men 'at råbe'.En 'protest' er en indsigelse mod noget; en 'protestant' noget lidt andet. (Blot for at nævne nogle af bøfferne -- den værste fejl må dog være "cunt" i stedet for "can't". Udtalen næsten ens, men det første hentyder mere til det kvinder og piger har mellem benene......)
Ved hjælp af en god ordbog burde du imidlertid komme uden om de værste bøffer. Prøv først selv og vend tilbage med en revideret tekst, så kigger vi et smut på det.
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Svar #4
30. januar 2011 af w23 (Slettet)
Hej Tak for din tid!!
Har rettet teksten, så godt jeg nu kan. Håber du vil se på den...
I think this will happen during the next 30 years:
The bridge is spear and the Catholics can’t get over to the protestant. That creates more hade between them, and Mickybo hade the protest even more then before. He partner in many demonstration and he get in prison about 2-4 time. On his 15 birthday his mother dead at desperation. He and his sisters didn’t know what to do, because before his mother worked. So Mickybo and his two oldest sisters started to work, and they move to a little opportunity. When he was 22 he liv alone. He decided to go to Australia, that had been hiss dream since he were 9. But he didn’t have the money to flay to Australia. He fell in loved with a catholic girl from France. They married. One day he suddenly thinks about Johnjo. He find his address and wrote a letter.
Johnjo studied and his mother worked all the day so they could survive. It was not safe like before at the protestant side. One day, after school, a catholic shoot him. He was in coma 1 mouth. His mother was an afraid, so they moved to the country. His mother married a farmer, she was so happy. He finishes school and traveled to Australia. He built his own farm with horses. Sometimes he actual thought about, the adventure with Mickybo.
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