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01. marts 2011 af Ibo199 (Slettet) - Niveau: B-niveau

Jeg har lavet en Resume af et video klip og vil gerne have den tjekket for grammatik fejl, er er nogen der er villig til at kigge den igennem?

The video clip is about a discussion with the Psychologist Dr. E Fuller in the CNN Channel. He tells about Jared Loughner who had committed crime, where he gunned 24 people and 9 of them was killed in Arizona. The discussion focused about why Tucson had committed this crime and violence and what is the reason about that. Including behavior, mentally ill, schizophrenia, delusion, parents and the government was the part of the discussion. The result about what there could happen if we don’t stop this violence and crime in the society in Arizona. Arizona the poorest city in USA, which it do that harder to treat this problem and also that the government is very bad for the violence people. The traditional problem of the society with the violence and criminal looking for answer about why all this happens and why do people make bad acts, which Dr. E Fuller comments for. Schizophrenia following these tragedies as has to stop and send people with Schizophrenia into a treatment, but the violence people denies to take the medicine, which Jared also don’t take the medicine. Therefore that Dr. E Fuller means that Jared mentally ill due to this crime.


Svar #1
01. marts 2011 af Ibo199 (Slettet)

Det er den der skal kigges på!

The video clip is about a discussion with the Psychologist Dr. E Fuller in the CNN Channel. He tells about Jared Loughner who had committed crime, where he gunned 24 people and 9 of them was killed in Arizona. The discussion focused about why Tucson had committed this crime and violence and what is the reason about that. Including behavior, mentally ill, schizophrenia, delusion, parents and the government was the part of the discussion. The result about what there could happen if we don’t stop this violence and crime in the society in Arizona. Arizona is the poorest city in USA, which it do that harder to treat this problem and also that the government is very bad for the violence people. The traditional problem of the society with the violence and criminal are looking for answer about why all this happens and why do people make bad acts, which Dr. E Fuller comments for. Schizophrenia following these tragedies as has to stop and send people with Schizophrenia into a treatment, but the violence people deny taking the medicine, which Jared also didn’t. Therefore that Dr. E Fuller means that Jared mentally ill due to this crime.


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01. marts 2011 af ebae (Slettet)

 The video clip is about a discussion with the Psychologist Dr. E Fuller in the CNN Channel. He tells about Jared Loughner who had committed crime, where he shot 24 people and 9 of them was killed in Arizona. The discussion focuses on why Tucson had committed this crime and violence and what his reason is for doing it. Including behavior, mentally illness, schizophrenia, delusion. His parents and the government was a part of the discussion. They discussed the result of what there could happen if we don’t stop this violence and crime in the society of Arizona. Arizona is the poorest city in USA, which makes it harder to treat this problem and also that the government is very bad for the violent people. The traditional problem of the society with the violence and criminal are looking for answers about why all of this happens and why do people make bad acts, which Dr. E Fuller comments for. Schizophrenia following these tragedies has to stop and send people with Schizophrenia into a treatment, but the violent people deny taking the medicine, which Jared also didn't. Therefore that Dr. E Fuller means that Jared mentally ill due to this crime.

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