rettelse/engelsk

Hej allesammen, jeg vil høre om der nogen der gider at rette det ,som jeg har skrevet på engelsk :) det vil være en stor hjælp :)

The school canteen is very expensive, because the food and drink is expensive. We are students, who don’t have that much money, and some students are working and some students receive SU. There are lots of  choices in the school canteen, and therefore there is something for everybody in the canteen. But a menu costs 22 crowns and a little coco-cola costs 16 crowns; to get a little coca cola is expensive. And I think it should be cheap to buy lunch at the school canteen. But we buy from the canteen anyway, because when we get thirsty you want a Coco Cola and we can not wait to we get home. The school canteen is too dirty, and the floor is very dirty, because they newer clean. But otherwise it's good to have a canteen at the school; we need it when you go to school.