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Abstract
Hej derude, jeg er igang med at skrive en abstract, hvilket jeg har vært ved. Jeg har indtil videre skrevet:
The paper examines bacteria and antibiotics which are a combination of the subjects chemistry A and biology b. The problem is that more and more bacteria become resistant towards antibiotics. The methods used were analyses of how antibiotics function and an experiment where the antibiotic called sulphanilamide was produced. The experiment contains three synthesis of sulphanilamide: in first synthesis there was produced p-acetamidobenzensulfonylchlorid. In second there was produced p-acetamidobenzensuphanilamide. Finally in third synthesis there was produced sulphonamide. The result of the experiment was the antibiotic, sulphanilamide. At last examine how bacteria develop resistant towards antibiotics. The conclusion is that bacteria can transfer their DNA which contains a gene that is resistant towards antibiotics. There are several ways of transferring the gene which contains resistant toward antibiotics. Thus there are lots of possibilities to develop resistant. Therefore more and more bacteria become resistant.
Men synes simpelthen ikke at det lyder godt nok.
Svar #1
06. marts 2011 af kaskadesommerfugl (Slettet)
Du skal ihvertfald være opmærksom på din bøjning af resistance.
the gene which contains resistant toward antibiotics -> resistant = resistance
Thus there are lots of possibilities to develop resistant -> resistant = resistance
derudover vil jeg foreslå følgende rettelser (ja jeg har bare rettet i det du har skrevet ovenfor):
The paper examines bacteria and antibiotics through the combination of the subjects chemistry A and biology b.
The problem discussed is the fact that more and more bacteria develop a resistance towards antibiotics.
The methods used is an analysis of how antibiotics function and an experiment where the antibiotic called sulphanilamide was produced.
The experiment contains three synthesis of sulphanilamide: in first synthesis there was produced p-acetamidobenzensulfonylchlorid. In second there was produced p-acetamidobenzensuphanilamide. Finally in the third synthesis there was produced sulphonamide.
The result of the experiment was the antibiotic, sulphanilamide.
At last it's examined how bacteria develops resistance towards antibiotics.
The conclusion is, that bacteria can transfer their DNA containing the antibiotic resistant gene to other bacteria.
There are several ways of transferring the gene which contains the resistance toward antibiotics, which results in more and more bacteria become resistant, caused by the many ways the bacteria can develop resistance.
Held og lykke
Svar #2
06. marts 2011 af Tweet (Slettet)
Jamen mange tak, men hedder det ikke:
The methods used are .....
da jeg nævner to?
Svar #4
07. marts 2011 af Tweet (Slettet)
Jamen ellers mange tak for hjælpen! : ) Jeg skammer lidt over, at min ikke var helt fejlfri, da jeg skulle forestille at være hende, der er god til engelsk : p øv øv.
Svar #5
07. marts 2011 af Andersen11 (Slettet)
The paper examines bacteria and antibiotics which are a combination of the subjects chemistry A and biology b. The problem is that more and more bacteria become resistant towards to antibiotics. The methods used were analyses of how antibiotics function and an experiment where the antibiotic called sulphanilamide was produced. The experiment contains three synthesis syntheses of sulphanilamide: in the first synthesis there was produced p-acetamidobenzensulfonylchlorid was produced. In second one there was produced p-acetamidobenzensuphanilamide was produced. Finally in the third synthesis there was produced sulphonamide was produced. The result of the experiment was the antibiotic, sulphanilamide. At last it was examine examined how bacteria develop resistant resistance towards to antibiotics. The conclusion is that bacteria can transfer their DNA which contains a gene that is resistant towards to antibiotics. There are several ways of transferring the gene which contains resistant resistance toward to antibiotics. Thus there are lots of possibilities to develop resistant for developing resistance. Therefore more and more bacteria become resistant.
Svar #6
07. marts 2011 af Tweet (Slettet)
Tak Andersen, men jeg har afleveret den og da det ikke er en engelsk afl. så skal teksten bare være ok læselig.
Svar #7
07. marts 2011 af Andersen11 (Slettet)
#6
Man kan så spørge sig selv om, hvad formålet er med sådan et abstract på engelsk. Enhver kan jo sende et dansk referat gennem google's translator.
Svar #8
07. marts 2011 af Tweet (Slettet)
Ja det er godt at se, hvad fejlene er og så få noget ud af det.
Nu har jeg så ikke har brugt google translate, fordi jeg får intet ud af det + det er nok en af de mest elendige oversættelser den kommer med. Også hvis du føler, at det virker sådan.
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