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Dear editor of City Gazette

I attended the football match this weekend, with some of my friends. We saw the hole match, and I was definitely not a good experience. Suddenly I saw 15 people starting burning flags, yelling, throw bottle, fighting evolve among hooligans and screaming. I was shocked to see how awful people is at the football match. I was worried about the spectators that were near by the hooligans. When the hooligans started to disturb with throwing bottle, and burning flags, the play had to be stopped. It was like a war zone. Fortunately I was xxx  far from them,  that they couldn’t hurt me. My friends and I decided to go home before we got hurt, but unfortunately one of the hooligans has thrown a bottle, and hit my friend, so he got a piece of broken glass in his skin, and that was so disgusting. He had to be driven to the hospital, because I think that he was in a bad shape.

It’s a shame to see such thing happens to a football match, it was like the world is going to end. A football match should go so badly?????. I thought that football match’s was supposed to be an amusement.

 The guards were trying to stop the disturbance, but unfortunately without luck.

Many people were arrested, and a man was hurt by the bottles, and was driven to the hospital.

I can tell you that I aren’t racist or a hooligan, and I don’t see the reason,  that the hooligans need to hurt the innocent people. Just because they are obsessed with the match, doesn’t give them the right to hurt other people. All of this isn’t necessary.

I think that the police are needed to be there earlier to stop the disturbance. I would have reduced the disturbance. The guards should pay more attention to the audience, and have more attention of what’s happening between them. I think what it would be a good idea to have customs officer to check the hooligans for bottle or other dangerous things. The hooligans will probably behave better,  because they don’t have something to hurt other people  xxxx. 

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Dear Editor Of City Gazette

I attended football match this weekend with some of my friends. We saw the whole match, and was definitely not a good experience. Suddenly I saw 15 people starting burning flags, yelling, throwing bottles, fights evolves among hooligans. I was shocked to see how awful people are at the football match. I was worried about the spectators that were close to the hooligans. When the hooligans started to disturb with throwing bottles, and burning flags, the game had to be stopped. It was like a war zone. Fortunately I was far enough from them that they couldn’t hurt me. My friends and I decided to go home before we got hurt, but unfortunately one of the hooligans was thrown a bottle, and hit my friend, so he got a piece of broken glass in his skin, and that was so disgusting. He had to be drove to the hospital, because I think that he was in a bad shape.

It’s a shame to see such thing happened to a football match, it was like the world was going to end. I thought that football matches was supposed to be an amusement.

 The guards was trying to stop the disturbance, but unfortunately without luck.

Many people were arrested, and a man was hurt by the bottles, and was drove to the hospital.

I can tell you that I am not racist or a hooligan, and I don’t see the reason, that the hooligans need to hurt innocent people. Just because they are obsessed with the match, doesn’t give them the right to hurt other people. All of this isn’t necessary.

I think that the police are needed to be there earlier to stop the disturbance. I would have reduced the disturbance. The guards should pay more attention to the audience, and had more attention of what’s happening between them. I think it would be a good idea to have customs officer to check the hooligans for bottle or other dangerous things. The hooligans will probably behave better because they don’t have something to hurt other people with.

Dear Sir, (Editor Of City Gazette)

I attended a football match this weekend with some of my friends. We saw the whole match, and it was definitely not a good experience. Suddenly I saw 15 people starting burning flags, yelling, throwing bottles(, f). Fights evolved(s) among football hooligans. I was shocked to see how awful people are at a (the) football match. I was worried about the spectators (that were) being close to the hooligans. When (the hooligans) these people started to disturb (with) throwing bottles(,) and burning flags, the game had to be stopped. It was like a war zone. Fortunately I was so far (enough) from them that they couldn’t hurt me. My friends and I decided to go home before we got hurt, but unfortunately one of the hooligans threw (was thrown a bottle,) and hit my friend(,) so that he got a piece of broken glass in his skin, and that was (so) very disgusting. He had to be (drove) taken to the hospital(,) because (I think that) he was in a bad shape.

It’s a shame to see such thing happen(ed to) at a football match(, i)It was (like) as if the world was going to end. I thought that football matches (was) were supposed to be an amusement.

 The guards (was trying) tried to stop the disturbance, but unfortunately without luck.

Many people were arrested, and a man was (hurt) injured by the bottles, and was (drove) taken to the hospital.

I can tell you that I am not a racist or a hooligan, and I don’t see (the) any reason(,) that (the) football hooligans (need)  have to hurt innocent people. Just because they are obsessed with the match(,) doesn’t give them the right to hurt others (people). (All of this isn’t)  None of this is called for necessary.

I think that the police are needed to be there earlier to stop the disturbance. (I) f they had been it would have reduced the disturbance. The guards should pay more attention to the audience, and (had more attention of) be on the look-out for what’s happening between them. I think it would be a good idea to have customs officer???? (to) check the hooligans for bottles or other dangerous things. (The hooligans) They will probably behave better (because) if they (don’t) haven't got something to hurt other people with.

-selv tak.