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Hej jeg skulle skrive én opgave om OCD på Engelsk så jeg har først skrave den på Dansk så oversættede jeg den til engelsk og har brugt google oversæt. er der nogen der kan hjælpe mig med at rette opgaven på Engelsk.
på forhånd tak.

OCD står for Obsessive Compulsive Disorde
OCD er en sygdom hvor man lider af tvangshandlinger og tvangstanker
Tvangstanker: er ideer og tankebilleder der dukker op i ens hoved flere gange
Tvangshandlinger: er handlinger man ofte gøre fx at vaske hænder 10-20 gange par time.
OCD rammer begge køn. Der er 2-3 % procent af befolkningen i Danmark som lider af OCD.
En lille historie
En 12 årig pige lider af OCD hun kunne lide tallet fem så hver gang hun skal i skole så skal pigen gå fem gange rundt om huset og hvis hun ikke gøre så ville en af familien dø. og på vej til skole er der nogle bestemte fliser hun skal gå på og hvis hun springer over en eller rammer en streg så skal hun hele vejen hjem igen på samme måde.
Når man har OCD er man meget desinficeret og man er ikke så meget modig.
En lille historie
En femten årig pige som også lider af OCD hun har selvmoders tanker pigen er meget smuk men hun syntes at det andre er smukkere end hende. Hun har aldrig haft selvtillid. Når man har OCD så er man altid usikker
En lille historie
En 29 årig kvinde lider også af OCD en gang skulle hendes mand og hende til et sommerhus hvor hun blev ved med at spørge hendes mand om komfuret var tændt og hun blev ved og ved og så var hendes mand nød til at køre hjem igen og sommerhuset lå lang væk hvor de bor.
OCD kan udvikle sig gradvist.
Sygdommen kan udvikles sig i flere år.
OCD kombination arvelige psykologisk sociale årsager.
Sygdommen kan behandles jo hurtigere man finder ud af det jo letter behandling
En lille historie 
Der var en 5 årig dreng han var meget bange for hans omgivelser han kunne ikke være tæt på hans venner han var kun tryg ved hans forældre især hans mor drengen var bange for at blive smittet af nogen. Så han sad altid i et hjørne og alle sagde til ham at han godt må lege med dem men drengen afviste hans venner og pædagogerne i børnehaven vidste ikke hvad han fejlede. Man fandt ud af at hun lider af OCD.

OCD stands for Obsessive Compulsive Disorde
OCD is a condition where you suffer from compulsions and obsessions
Obsessions: the ideas and mental images that pop into your head several times
Compulsions: are actions often do, such as washing hands 10-20 times a few hours.
OCD affects men and women. There are 2-3% percent of people in Denmark who suffer from OCD.
A little history
A 12 year old girl suffering from OCD she liked the number five so every time she should be in school then the girl walk five times around the house and if she does not do so would one of the family die. and going to school there are certain tiles she must go on and if she skips one or hits a line then she all the way back home the same way.
When you have OCD you are very sanitized and you are not so very brave.
A little history
A fifteen year old girl who also suffer from OCD she has even mother thought the girl is very pretty but she seemed to the others is more beautiful than her. She has never had confidence. When you have OCD then you are always uncertain
A little history
A 29 year old woman also suffers from OCD once was to her husband and her to a home where she was asking her husband on the stove was lit and she went on and on and so was her husband have to run back home and cottage was far away where they live.
OCD may develop gradually.
The disease can be developed for several years.
OCD combination hereditary psychological and social reasons.
The disease can be treated sooner you find out it facilitates the treatment
A little history
There was a 5 year old boy he was very afraid of his surroundings, he could not be close to his friends he was only comfortable with his parents especially his mother the boy was afraid of being infected by someone. So he always sat in a corner and all said to him that he may well play with them but the boy refused his friends and teachers in kindergarten did not know what was wrong. We found out that she suffers from OCD