diskussionsopgave

Stykket er fyldt med fejl, specielt i forbindelse med verberne, der skal bøjes korrekt. Der er fejl med substantiver brugt som adjektiv (difference/different), og adverbier brugt som subject (moreover). Sproget giver slet ikke indtryk af at høre hjemme i et gymnasialt B-niveau.

Det ved jeg godt, derfor prøver jeg at arbejde på det, kan du ikke påpege hvor jeg skal rette henne?

Jeg er igang med at skrive en stil vil du se om sproget ok der?
Initially, one might think that Viv McDade’s short story has the sole purpose of portraying a memory from a woman’s childhood. However, this is not just a random fragment of someone’s journal, but more likely a critical and acute analysis of British society.
The entire storyline is portrayed as being a grown woman’s flashback from her childhood.
The scenery is seen throughout the eyes of a ten year old girl, who lives the well-known suburban life of a lower-working class family. The key elements of such a position are all present, what with the hard working father who comes home after a long day at work and the stay-at-home mom who anticipates her husband’s arrival, and is ready with dinner at the stroke of the clock.

#2

Stor set overalt.

Do you think that is all right to have the death penalty? Why is there death penalty in differences countries? If you have committed a murder or rape do you think that you deserve to be sentence to e death?

It is not necessary that there is death penalty everywhere in the world. But at the same time there is death penalty somewhere in other countries. Because some people think that it is appropriate to have the death penalty if you have committed a mistake. In “Iraq” it is absolutely fine to have death penalty. For example, if you happen to kill someone in “Iraq” you would be sentence to the death. This is due to the rules in “Iraq” in case you have committed a murder. At the same time if you have steal something from a person you would be punishment to disown your hands. On the other hand in “Great Britain” there is not death penalty compare to “Iraq”. But at one time you could be punish by death in 1960 in “Great Britain”. But today you cannot be sentence to death, because it is not more morally right to punish someone in the way?? in “Great Britain”. The fact is that some people think if you have kill someone you have to be sentence to death, because you have to feel the same pain. There is moreover who think that it is not morally right to punish someone by death. In other words, it is not the fine to face the death penalty??. It is much better if you get sent to the prison and you get your corresponding punishment??.

The fact is that the people have differences in opinions about "death penalty". Some peoples think that it is absolutely fine?? to have death penalty. On the other hand some people do not think that it is right to have death penalty. The fact is that every individual will have different opinions in regards to the "death penalty". But if you have rape or kill someone you deserve to be sent to t prison.

#3

Det er vist ikke noget du selv har skrevet. Det er løftet ordret fra denne opgave

https://www.studienet.dk/Opgaver/2012-maj-engelsk-delproeve-2-a-gift-my-mother-281002.aspx

Du lærer ikke noget ved at kopiere andres arbejde.

Jeg skulle bare lige have lidt inspiration men hvordan kan jeg løfte min sproget i engelsk?

#6

Hvad mener du med " hvordan kan jeg løfte min sproget i engelsk?" ?

Jeg mener hvordan kan jeg blive bedre til engelsk?

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