Engelsk retning

Hej er der en venlig sjæl som ville rette hele mit juleeventyr, Ved godt at jeg ikke er så god til engelsk men tak på forhånd. :)

Once upon a time there was a Santa called Jørgen.

Santa Claus went out to all his niches when Santa Claus came outside, it was very slippery, so Santa Claus slipped and slid down a hill and slid into a forest floor. Santa Claus looked in the woods for 4 hours, suddenly a red van came up with a car running towards him and stopped. There rose 2 men in red jerseys and went to him and grabbed his arms and put him in the back of the car. Santa thought they came to help him because they had red clothes and drove in a red car. "Red in Santa's world means love. When they had taken a break with him, they stopped and took him out into a room. Santa Claus sat on a chair in the room with her Santa's suit and red cheeks. When they came in to him they told him it was over Christmas from that day on, Santa was silent and said a little word and it was "The Christmas will never be abolished". They left the room and Santa lay down and sleep. The next morning it was December 23rd. It had become the day when Santa and his niches were going out with all the presents for the children. Santa stood up and the two men stood before him. What the two men did not know was that Santa could spell. Santa claus two something splendid powder up his pocket and threw it on them. The two men got away and Santa Claus hurried out the door and out on a road. Santa was waiting for 20 minutes for a car that he could be driven off. A car came picking up Santa Claus and asked where he was going, Santa said, "I would like to be driven to my workshop, which is the Juleværkstedet". Santa Claus came to his workshop and all the niches came to him immediately and asked him where he was, Santa said he did not help and tell it because they had to bring all the presents to the children. Finally it became Christmas Eve and all the presents had come out.

Merry Christmas.