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Grammatik
Nogle som vil rette grammatikken i følgende sætninger?
This picture is a water colored print. The person that you are seeing is a British general, Lord Kitchener. He had his position as a general in World War One. The Lord is placed in the middle of the poster, which gives him the whole focus. The point of view is his finger, that points directly at the reader. Furthermore, his facial expression is very serious and bleak, which affects the audience. The text on the poster, especially “YOU”, is written which big letters, to emphasize that the army wants every man to enjoy them. The colors of the poster are neutral, except the “Britons” and the text at the bottom. The red color is being different from the others because it is a more garish color, which can be compared to the blood, sweat, and tears through the war. This poster is made to make the people, who are staying at home, to pull themselves together, and join the war to help their country, when the country needs their help. The poster encouraged millions of men to join the army, without returning home. He does also include the King himself, which may put more pressure on the boys and men outside. Lord Kitchener is wearing the national uniform, which makes it more serious and credible.
Svar #1
27. august 2018 af SelmaWho
I linje 5 er det "with" og ikke "which". I samme linie er det "army want" uden s. I linje 6 kan du bare skrive "the red color is different..."
Svar #2
27. august 2018 af StoreNord
https://www.grammarly.com/blog/color-colour/
"When choosing between color and colour, keep in mind that both spellings are correct.
The shorter one, color, is the preferred spelling in the United States.
The rest of the English-speaking world uses the longer form, colour."
Svar #3
27. august 2018 af Stygotius
Studieportalen er ikke en gratis retteservice, men en hjælp til selvhjælp ved uløselige, konkrete problemer
Svar #4
27. august 2018 af StoreNord
Men nogen gange bliver man rettet, selv om man ikke har bedt om det.
Svar #5
28. august 2018 af JackandJack (Slettet)
jeg har så valgt at se din opgave fra mit perspektiv, hvori jeg skiftet nogle ord ud som vil være rigtige at bruge. HUSK! dine sætninger skal ikke bruges på samme måde som på dansk! og jeg har for eks. taget enjoy og byttet det ud med join, fordi enjoy= nyde/nyder og join=tilføje/tilknyt....
så kan du sammenligne og rette dine fejl
( undskyld hvis jeg også har fejl haha)
This picture is a water colored print. The person that you`re seeing is a British general, Lord Kitchener. His main role was a general in World War One. The Lord is placed in the middle of the poster, which makes whole spotlight on him. The point of view its his finger, that directly points at the reader. Furthermore, his facial expression are very serious and bleak, which affects the audience. The text on the poster, especially “YOU”, are written with huge letters, to emphasize that the army wants every man to join them. The colors on the poster are neutral, except two parts where it says the “Britons” and the text at the bottom. The red color is different compared to the others because its more a garish color, which can be symbolized to the blood, sweat, and tears throughout the war. This poster was made to the people, who are staying at home, to own up together, and join the war to help their country, when the country needs their help. The poster has encouraged millions of men to join the army, without returning home. He also include the King himself, which may put more pressure on the boys and men outside. Lord Kitchener are wearing the national uniform, which makes it more serious and credible.
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