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17. marts kl. 16:22 af Helen123 - Niveau: B-niveau

Hej, er der nogle søde mennesker der kunne tænke sig at rette min engelsk artikel, + begrundelse ift fejl

“Wolf eats little girl and her grandma”

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Fortunately for them, the incident was not their end, we can all breathe a sigh of relief.

A wolf who is not noticed

It was in the morning that the little girl called Red Cap was given the job to deliver a piece of cake and a bottle of wine to her ill Grandma in the woods. The first time, she met the wolf, she did not raise awareness of the dangerous creature in front of her. The second time, when she arrived at Grandma’s, she saw Grandma in her bed. It was a very frightening thought, the Wolf has exactly dressed like her grandma, but Red-Cap could not identify, what or whom it was behind the clothing. At the time being the girl’s life was bordering on death, as well as her grandma’s in the stomach of the wolf. Before the wolf wolfed down both of the incident family members, he even said to the pure little girl "The better to eat you with!" owing to/due to his terrible big moth.

"Ah, how frightened I have been! How dark it was inside the wolf;"

Miracle of miracles

They say that the little girl and her Grandma was saved by the bell/border if it was not for the huntsman near them. Regarding the witness say that the huntsman got curious about the stomach of the wolf. Furthermore, it has been notified that the wolf was cut open by him and then came to realise that both of the family members were walking miracle. In matters concerning Red Cap’s mother has been informed at this point. Moreover/overall the relative can now breathe a sigh of relief, given that both lives are uninjuried.


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18. marts kl. 10:47 af Stygotius

Hvad mener du med "i forhold til fejl" ???

Det hedder: min engelsk artikel

(not raise awareness of) = she did not see / she was not aware of / she did not notice / she was oblivious of / she did not realise there was  

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Fortunately for them, the incident was not their end, we can all breathe a sigh of relief.

A wolf who is not noticed

It was in the morning that the little girl called Red Cap was given the job to deliver a piece of cake and a bottle of wine to her (ill) sick (G)grandma in the woods. The first time(,) she met the wolf, she did not raise awareness of the dangerous creature in front of her. The second time, when she arrived at (G)grandma’s house, she saw (Grandma) her in her bed. It was a very frightening thought, the (W)wolf (has exactly dressed) was dressed exactly like her grandma, (but) and Red-Cap could not (identify,) see what or (whom it) who was behind the (clothing) dress/clothes. At (the time being) that moment the girl’s life (was bordering on death,) hung in a balance as well as her grandma’s in the stomach of the wolf???. Before the wolf wolfed down both of the incident family members???, he even said to the (pure) poor little girl "The better to eat you with???!" owing to/due to his terrible big (moth) mouth.

"Ah, how frightened I have been! How dark it was inside the wolf;"

Miracle of miracles

They say that the little girl and her (G)grandma (was) were saved by the bell/border if it was not for??? the (huntsman) hunter near them. Regarding the witness say that the huntsman got curious??? about the stomach of the wolf. Furthermore, it has been notified that the wolf was cut open by him (and), who then came to realise that both (of the) family members were walking miracle???. In matters concerning Red Cap’s mother has been informed at this point???. Moreover/overall the relative??? can now breathe a sigh of relief, given that both lives (are uninjuried) were saved.

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