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HASTER... Sports in Austria... HASTER

25. maj 2005 af Malfoy (Slettet)
Hej håber atd er er nogle der vil kigge på denne tekst det haster...

Sports in Australia

Sport is a very big thing in Australia.
The girl Nikki told us a little bit about it, she told that she started to play netball when she was five years old and she finished it when she was 15 years old.

Nikki’s favourite sport is swimming she love to swim she felt like a fish without water here in Denmark because there are not so many lakes here in Denmark.
Nikki said that the most of the activities are water activities because there are much of lakes in Australia.
There are many sports in Australia. The girl Nikki told about the Sport swimming she told that it is her favourite sport. She said that she felt like a fish without water in Denmark.
She said that the most of the activities are water activities because there are much of lakes in Australia.

I må meget gerne lave sætningerne om så det kommer til at lyde vedre...

Malfoy

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Svar #1
25. maj 2005 af Y.vs.J (Slettet)

- she told us(eller me?)...
- swimming, she loves to swim, she feels like a fish without water here in Denmark because there aren't many lakes here.
- said that most...
- there are many lakes in Aus...

(er ikke med på, hvorfor du gentager en masse, men har også rette det)
- Nikki told us, (altid us, me etc. efter told!)
- the sport swimming, she told us/me that it is...
- that most of the...
- there are many lakes...

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Svar #2
25. maj 2005 af Doven stræber (Slettet)

Her er mit forslag. Jeg er ikke sikker på om kommaerne er rigtigt placeret. Jeg har skåret det meget ned med det er for at undgå for mange gentagelser:

Sport is a very big thing in Australia.
The girl Nikki told us a bit about it, she told that she started out playing netball when she was five years old but she gave it up when she was 15 years old.

Nikki’s favourite sport is swimming, she loves to swim. She felt like a fish without water here in Denmark because there are not so many lakes.
Nikki said that because of the many lakes in Australia, there are a lot of water activities there.

Held og Lykke med prøven.

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