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04. juni 2005 af
nadal (Slettet)
Er der ikke nogen der er søde at smide nogle rettelser..
Relation:
Both Salter and Braling are using technology so they can fulfill their desire.
Salter wants a copy of his first son. In addition, Braling want a Marionette, so he can get a respite.
Both are unconcerned about the consequence/ the ethically correct. In addition, both stories have an unhappy ending. B2 Salter’s son was killed, and Bralings marionette replaces him forever.
Relation:
Both Salter and Braling are using technology so they can fulfill their desire.
Salter wants a copy of his first son. In addition, Braling want a Marionette, so he can get a respite.
Both are unconcerned about the consequence/ the ethically correct. In addition, both stories have an unhappy ending. B2 Salter’s son was killed, and Bralings marionette replaces him forever.
Svar #2
04. juni 2005 af Waterhouse (Slettet)
Jeg ville mene at de i andet afsnit skulle være consequences.
Derudover kan du i stedet for "so they can"/"so he can" (først afsnit) blot bruge "to", så det f.eks. bliver
"Both Salter and Braling are using technology to fulfill their desire."
Derudover kan du i stedet for "so they can"/"so he can" (først afsnit) blot bruge "to", så det f.eks. bliver
"Both Salter and Braling are using technology to fulfill their desire."
Svar #3
04. juni 2005 af Therackoo (Slettet)
Så kan du bruge: "Additionally", both stories have an unhappy ending. istedet for "In addition".
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