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Videreskrivning på H.C. Andersen eventyr

24. oktober 2011 af Pett (Slettet)

Hej, vi har fået til opgave at skrive videre på H.C Andersens eventyr, The Flying Trunk. Håber der er nogle som vil rette det igennem for eventuelle fejl.

 

He had to find a way to get to his bride on. He thought and thought until he remembered his friend Peter butterfly who also lived in the woods.
He called him "Peter, Peter where are you?” There was no answer, but suddenly out of the blue popped up Peter butterfly. "I'm right here you cannot see me?"Said Peter butterfly. Merchant's son was delighted at the sight of his friend. He told Peter butterfly the whole story; that a spark from the firework had set the trunk on fire, and burned to ashes, so he didn’t have any way to reach his pride.


Peter butterfly would be happy to help his friend; the merchant’s son jumped on the back of the butterfly and flew away. They flew over forests, mountains and deserts until they reached the palace where the bride waited impatiently.  The king thanked the butterfly many times.
The merchant's son and the princess were married and now live happily. And Peter butterfly got a place in the king's garden.
 


Brugbart svar (1)

Svar #1
24. oktober 2011 af Eksamen12 (Slettet)

Jeg forstår ikke helt hvad du skriver her ?

 

There was no answer, but suddenly out of the blue popped up Peter butterfly.

  Der var ingen svar, men pludselig ud af det blå dukkede op Peter sommerfugl?

Skulle der ikke står'' Der var ingen svar, men pludselig ud af det blå dukkede peter sommerfugl op'' ?

Hvis det gav mening                                                 


Svar #2
24. oktober 2011 af Pett (Slettet)

Jo - det skulle der. Er der ellers grammatiske fejl?


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Svar #3
24. oktober 2011 af Stygotius

Det er for meget Danglish og for lidt engelsk.


Svar #4
24. oktober 2011 af Pett (Slettet)

Vil du give et eksempel?


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Svar #5
24. oktober 2011 af Stygotius

Ja, der er mange:

1.  He had to find a way to get to his bride on

2.  out of the blue popped up Peter butterfly

3.  you cannot see me?

4.  Merchant's son was.........

5.  the firework

6.  so he didn’t have any way to reach his pride.  (blot uforståeligt)

7.  where the bride waited

8.  And Peter butterfly got a place in the king's garden. (også dårligt på dansk)


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