hjælp tak! :)

Hej, jeg ville lige spørge om nogen ville være sød at rette denne stil!

Har virkelig svært ved engelsk?, 

Tak på forhånd :-D

The differences between my life and an Amish person:

Amish women make their own long, dark - colored dresses. They cover their hair with cloth hats, called a prayer hats. And women do not wear jewelry. As a Muslim a very ladies have to wear scarf on the head, it's a rule in Islam.  At the day I go with jewelry and a bit make - up, but not when I pray. It shows the differences between an English woman and an Amish. Amish people live in simple farm houses. Family members including small children, all work in the fields. Crops are planted and harvested without modern farm technology. It is very quaint for me to work out of the fields. I have a father and a mother who work and earn money, to their children, so they can get something to eat and have a good life, but they do it one a other way. The Amish do not drive car. Instead, they travel in buggies pulled by trained horses. Modern things like electricity, central heating and indoor water pipes are not considered necessary. Many Amish people do not use telephone. They do not want to be connected to the outside world. In my house do we see news every day, because we want to see what happens in the outside world. Amish people humble, when the English, come like tourists and take picture of them.  Amish do what is necessary to do, with little to no complaining.

The similarities between my life and an Amish person:

One thing is, that an Amish live in a simple, Christian life. They are very religious. As I'm but I'm not a Christian but a Muslim. I really love my religion, and I will do anything for it. I complete the Ordnung in Islam. I pray five time at the day, and I'm proud, as an Amish is. For me my family means a lot, and family means everything to an Amish. Amish people are not selfish, but they are very pacifist and righteous, and that can we see when they work together on the field and so on.  And so I'm.