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Kan man måske få noget hjælp tager mindre end to minutter! :)

23. november 2011 af MunaHassan (Slettet)

Hej, jeg ville gerne have om at du ville rette denne stil? :)

Tak på forhånd, jeg ville sætte stor pris på det! :-D

 

The differences between my life and an Amish person:

Amish women make their own long, dark - colored dresses. They cover their hair with cloth hats, called a prayer hats. And women do not wear jewelry. As a Muslim a very ladies have to wear scarf on the head, it's a rule in Islam.  At the day I go with jewelry and a bit make - up, but not when I pray. It shows the differences between an English woman and an Amish. Amish people live in simple farm houses. Family members including small children, all work in the fields. Crops are planted and harvested without modern farm technology. It is very quaint for me to work out of the fields. I have a father and a mother who work and earn money, to their children, so they can get something to eat and have a good life, but they do it one a other way. The Amish do not drive car. Instead, they travel in buggies pulled by trained horses. Modern things like electricity, central heating and indoor water pipes are not considered necessary. Many Amish people do not use telephone. They do not want to be connected to the outside world. In my house do we see news every day, because we want to see what happens in the outside world. Amish people humble, when the English, come like tourists and take picture of them.  Amish do what is necessary to do, with little to no complaining.


The similarities between my life and an Amish person:

One thing is, that an Amish live in a simple, Christian life. They are very religious. As I'm but I'm not a Christian but a Muslim. I really love my religion, and I will do anything for it. I complete the Ordnung in Islam. I pray five time at the day, and I'm proud, as an Amish is. For me my family means a lot, and family means everything to an Amish. Amish people are not selfish, but they are very pacifist and righteous, and that can we see when they work together on the field and so on.  And so I'm.


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24. november 2011 af rakijovic

Enten behersker du ikke standarddansk ("jeg ville gerne have om at du ville rette" tyder lidt på det), eller så er du flabet; "kan man måske få noget hjælp [sic] er ikke just den mest diplomatiske af åbningsfraser.

Mindre end to minutter? Du drømmer....

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24. november 2011 af Stygotius (Slettet)

-verujem da je samo nesiguran u danskom i uopce nije neuctiva.


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24. november 2011 af MunaHassan (Slettet)

Undskyld man kom til at skrive den på den måde, men mente om man måtte få hjælp, og hvis du ikke er til nogen hjælp, vil du så ikke bare lad være med at kommentere, og hvad rager det dig med IDENTITETSKIFTE!!!!

OG tal dansk!!!


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24. november 2011 af MunaHassan (Slettet)

Tak får hjælpen Stygotius! :), hvis jeg forstod det på den måde? :)


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24. november 2011 af MunaHassan (Slettet)

Vil du være sød at hjælpe mig Stygotius! :-)

 


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24. november 2011 af Stygotius (Slettet)

Ja, det vil jeg gerne.

 

Amish women make their own long, dark - colored dresses. They cover their hair with cloth hats, called (a) prayer hats(. A), and women do not wear jewelry. As a Muslim (a very) ladies have to wear a scarf on the head, it's an Islamic  rule (in Islam). (At the day) In the daytime I (go with) wear jewelry and a bit of make - up, but not when I pray. (It) This shows the difference(s) between an English woman and an Amish one. Amish people live in simple farm houses. Family members, including small children, all work in the fields. Crops are planted and harvested without using modern farm technology. (It is very quaint for me to w) Working out of the fields is very strange for me. I have a father and a mother who work and earn money(, to) for their children, so they can get something to eat and have a good life, but they do it (one a other) another way. The Amish do not drive car(s). Instead(,) they travel in buggies pulled by trained horses. Modern things like electricity, central heating and indoor (water pipes) plumbing are not considered necessary. Many Amish people do not use the telephone. They do not want to be connected to the outside world. In my house do we see the news every day(,) because we want to see what happens in the outside world. Amish people are humble, when the English(,) come like tourists (and) to take pictures of them.  The Amish do what is necessary to do, with little (to) or no complaining.

The similarities between my life and an the Amish (person) way of life:

One thing is(,) that an Amish lives (in) a simple, Christian life. They are very religious(. A) -as I'm (but) though I'm not a Christian but a Muslim. I really love my religion, and I will do anything for it. I complete the Ordnung in Islam????. I pray five time (at) a the day, and I'm proud, as is an Amish (is). (For me m) My family means a lot to me, (and family) as it means everything to an Amish. Amish people are not selfish, but they are (very) pacifist and (righteous) honest, and (that can we see) this is obvious when they work together (on the) in a field (and so on) or something like that.

  (And so I'm)  I believe I am too

 

.........Forstod du det bosniske ?


Svar #7
25. november 2011 af MunaHassan (Slettet)

Ja, haha, det var noget med at jeg ikke skrev det korrekte dansk, og det ikke var respektløst, TUSIND tak skal du have! :D

 


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