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Hej er der nogen som har lyst til at rette noget af min engelsk stil, jeg er nemlig dårlig til engelsk og har selv prøvet at skrive uden at bruge google translate:) her er den
Its nine o’clock. I lied in my bed and expecting anxious to tomorrow, because it’s my first day on my new school tomorrow. I had butterfly in my stomach. I do the people would respond strange, because I am ugly and poor, then my family has not money, because my father user the money to beer.
My name is Mutsuz and meaning of my name is miserable, that will suited me fine, because I had not friends, and not good life.
Jeg vil bare lige se om jeg kan finde ud aff det :D
Svar #1
13. december 2011 af Stygotius (Slettet)
Det meste giver ingen mening, og det kan ikke rettes, men skal skrives helt om.
Svar #2
13. december 2011 af Aleynaa
jeg er virkelig dårlig til engelsk vil du ikke hjælpe mig jeg skal aflevere den imorgen inden klokken 00:00, og jeg har ikke muligheden for at få hjælp udover studieportalen..
Svar #3
13. december 2011 af Stygotius (Slettet)
Its nine o’clock. I (lied) am lying in my bed (and) expecting anxious to tomorrow????, because (it’s) tomorrow is my first day (on) at my new school (tomorrow). I have(d) (butterfly in my stomach) butterflies in my belly. I do (the) know that people would respond strangely(,) because I am ugly and poor, (then) and because my family (has) have no(t) money, (because) since my father (user the money) spends it (to) on beer.
My name is Mutsuz and the meaning of my name is miserable, (that will suited me fine) which is very appropriate because I have(d) no(t) friends, and not a good life.
Svar #4
13. december 2011 af Aleynaa
Jeg er virkelig taknemmlig tusinde tak.. jeg har stadig 200 ord tilbage som skal rettes.. anxious(betyder at være bange) to tomorow
Svar #5
13. december 2011 af Stygotius (Slettet)
Så skal det være "expecting great fear tomorrow."
........Send bare de andre 200 ord.
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