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Jeg har fået en sprogopgave for der lyder: Nedenstående tekst er et uddrag af den 13-årig Adrian Moles dagbog. Gør kort rede for dens karakteristiske stiltræk. Underbyg din besvarelse med citater fra teksten.

Tuesday January 27th
Art was dead good day. I painted a lonely boy standing on a bridge. The boy had just lost his first love to his ex-best friend. The ex-best friend was struggling in the torrential river. The boy was watching his ex-best friend down. The ex-best friend looked a bit like Nigel. The boy looked a bit like me. Ms Fossington-Gore said my picture “had depth”, so did the river Ha! Ha! Ha!.
I am going to bed early to think about Pandora and do my back-stretching exercises.
I haven't grown for two weeks. If this carries on I will be a midget.
I will go to the doctor's on Saturday if the pot is still there.
I can't live like this with everybody staring.
 

Jeg kan blandt andet argumentere for at sætningerne er relativ korte og virker som opremsning; de er ikke koblet sammen. Det er uformelt og sproget er simpelt. Der er desuden lydord: Ha!... Jeg kan ikke komme videre. Håber der er nogen der kan hjælpe!