Or eller Nor? 8-tal?

Don, who is a fine and healthy young boy, in the age of 13, asked his mother to explain further and in details what “mutual respect” means. These days he is working on exactly that topic at the school and he is forced to do some kind of rapport in order to finish up an approaching presentation for the whole class, almost the whole school itself. Often, on his way back home from school, he meets with an old man, with a rather strong attitude, but as a matter of fact, very friendly and non-hostile, probably in his eighties. He is wearing what look like second-hand or something like that cast-off clothes you sometimes finds littering around on the streets. They’re always having a little chat, before Don continues his way home. Because of his assignment from school, he was curious to hear how the old man, would explain it. After school he and Don sat down chatting about different subjects like, hate, contamination in the air and water and the consequences of it, for slowly bearing into the subject of respect. He told Don a story he has heard from one of his old fellows, a rather sad story about a girl, who was called “Permanent Tear”. “Permanent Tear has a very odd and bizarre story behind her„ he said. “First of all she was born without a family nor a name and no one didn’t really make acquaintance towards her or paid any officious attention„ he told, “On the day of her arrival, no one was there to meet her,, he said. “She was something of a tragedy, always standing in the shade of despair„ – “The reason for her name was that she had a mole shaped like a tear, so she kind of had a so called “Permanent Tear” „ he told. “She was different though, or that was what some people thought. She was very sort of withdrawn in her manner, very indecisive and poetic, though she was very ingratiating despite her doubtfulness for the world„, he said, “She went to school, and pupils were kind of mobbing around her all the time, teasing her about being, what they called and described as strange and not quite right in the head„ he told. “Their established roles within a clan have always been a mystery full of contradictions, and myth for her, something she wanted to explore, and it wasn’t conducive to her belief when the “racism” and teasing showed its ugly face„ he told Don, who just sat there listening closely. “You see, what I haven’t told you yet Don, is that “Permanent Tear” was a real Aborigine, which was the reason for her “strange” look – but in fact, nothing else was different about her, a human being as you and I, Don,, Don just sat there starring. “Have you lost your tongue, pal? Old man asked. But Don hasn’t lost his voice; it just occurred to him that a black boy in his own class seems to have more or less the same problems as what the old man describes has happened to “Permanent Tear”.

“At my time it was mere good for nothing trying to help her, you would probably be killed or something more evil and dastardly – it was later shown that she, and all other with a mole shaped like a tear, actually came from some kind of a parallel dimension – to our world,, And many of them still lives the day today – but respected, as they respect other peoples, let’s call it mutual respect, shall we Don?

“You see Don, in today’s commercial world we see many explanations of those legends, some are genuine others are modern concoctions – those things have no real meaning to old definitive’s and cultural beliefs, like those people back in the day. But nowadays they have become widely accepted as truthful stories by anyone, but for those old people,,

“The sad story about “Permanent Tear”, is that she was pushed so far out the distance, that she committed suicide with only one message to the human beings” Old man said
“Well, what was that,, Don Asked
“I only wanted you to wipe my tears away; - the last word “away” is still echoing in the valley.


Jeg ved der er en del Gramatiske fejl, men helt ærligt - et 8 tal? Det er Engelsk på HTX B Niveau? - Der var mange i klassen, der foruden flere fjel osv, fik 9 - Er i forvejen ikke så gode venner med min engelsklærer, så skal lige have klargjort om det kan være med vilje. Emnet er Sci Fi.