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03. april 2006 af
bllcrp88 (Slettet)
My trip to Bornholm.
Tuesday the 21. of March 2006
This was the day which was appointed for us, to meet by the central station in Copenhagen. We met and took a train to a Swedish city called Ystad. In the train we had lots of fun. We were teasing each other for fun, playing cards, listening to music and so on. When we arrived to Ystad, a ferry was waiting for us and the other passengers, the heard that the ferry is one of the fastest in the world! When my friends and I went up on the deck while the ferry was sailing, the wind almost threw us over board.
At last, we arrived to Bornholm, and the houses in Hasle in which we were supposed to sleep in. I liked those houses in particular, because they where very big and nicely furnished. I was in room with Bilal.
At that night, we held a party in our house, and almost everyone from the class came over. Because of that we barely slept that night.
Wednesday the 22. of March 2006
I could not wake up this day, my eyes simply were closing while I was eating breakfast. But I had to pull my self to getter, because this day we were supposed to go to a certain place at a hill in Bornholm. At this hill we were given some exercises which we were supposed to solve in a period of short time.
When we came home, we were given a short period of spare time, which we used to go to Bornholms capital called Rønne. It was a beautiful town, and I think it looked so much like Køge.
When we returned to our homes in Hasle, everyone was given a job to prepare the dinner. Soon we all were eating together and having lots of fun. Every house were given the assignment to prepare a entertainment show, which we were supposed to show in front of the rest of the class.
The rest of this day passed by whit parties to late night. In particular, we had lots of fun with a water pipe in which we tried to put many different things in and then smoke them.
Thursday the 23. of March 2006
Unfortunately, this was the day we were supposed to go home to Sjælland. But we really tried to enjoy the last time of our stay in Bornholm. Therefore we went for a trip to some of the most beautiful places I have ever seen in Denmark. Although we had to walk for a long period of time, it was worth it, because of the beautiful sight.
We walked back to our houses, were a bus came and took us to Rønne from where we were to take the ferry back to Ystad. But we had some spare time in Rønne, and some of my friends and I went to McDonalds to get dinner. I really don’t understand why they placed McDonalds so fare away from the city. We had to walk 50 minuets to get to it! And we really couldn’t walk back again, so we called a taxi who drove us to the ferry. In the ferry, I bought some souvenirs for my family and lots of candy for my self.
When I came back home, I was really tired because I had only slept for about 6 hours at all in Bornholm. So I went to sleep and didn’t woke up for the next 15 hours.
And that was my trip to Bornholm!
Tuesday the 21. of March 2006
This was the day which was appointed for us, to meet by the central station in Copenhagen. We met and took a train to a Swedish city called Ystad. In the train we had lots of fun. We were teasing each other for fun, playing cards, listening to music and so on. When we arrived to Ystad, a ferry was waiting for us and the other passengers, the heard that the ferry is one of the fastest in the world! When my friends and I went up on the deck while the ferry was sailing, the wind almost threw us over board.
At last, we arrived to Bornholm, and the houses in Hasle in which we were supposed to sleep in. I liked those houses in particular, because they where very big and nicely furnished. I was in room with Bilal.
At that night, we held a party in our house, and almost everyone from the class came over. Because of that we barely slept that night.
Wednesday the 22. of March 2006
I could not wake up this day, my eyes simply were closing while I was eating breakfast. But I had to pull my self to getter, because this day we were supposed to go to a certain place at a hill in Bornholm. At this hill we were given some exercises which we were supposed to solve in a period of short time.
When we came home, we were given a short period of spare time, which we used to go to Bornholms capital called Rønne. It was a beautiful town, and I think it looked so much like Køge.
When we returned to our homes in Hasle, everyone was given a job to prepare the dinner. Soon we all were eating together and having lots of fun. Every house were given the assignment to prepare a entertainment show, which we were supposed to show in front of the rest of the class.
The rest of this day passed by whit parties to late night. In particular, we had lots of fun with a water pipe in which we tried to put many different things in and then smoke them.
Thursday the 23. of March 2006
Unfortunately, this was the day we were supposed to go home to Sjælland. But we really tried to enjoy the last time of our stay in Bornholm. Therefore we went for a trip to some of the most beautiful places I have ever seen in Denmark. Although we had to walk for a long period of time, it was worth it, because of the beautiful sight.
We walked back to our houses, were a bus came and took us to Rønne from where we were to take the ferry back to Ystad. But we had some spare time in Rønne, and some of my friends and I went to McDonalds to get dinner. I really don’t understand why they placed McDonalds so fare away from the city. We had to walk 50 minuets to get to it! And we really couldn’t walk back again, so we called a taxi who drove us to the ferry. In the ferry, I bought some souvenirs for my family and lots of candy for my self.
When I came back home, I was really tired because I had only slept for about 6 hours at all in Bornholm. So I went to sleep and didn’t woke up for the next 15 hours.
And that was my trip to Bornholm!
Svar #1
03. april 2006 af chrissy86_2630 (Slettet)
jeg ville skrive: we tesed each other for fun, played cards, listened to music and so on.
Det er jo noget der har forgået så det skal nok helst være i datid
When we arrived to Ystad, a ferry was waiting for us and the other passengers, the heard that the ferry is one of the fastest in the world!...
fostår ikke helt hvad du mener med the heard that... du må mene noget andet der
When we came home, we were HAD A LITTLE spare time, which we used to go to THE BIGGEST TOWN OF BORNHOLM (det er ikke hovedstaden, men bare den største by på øen) called Rønne. It was a beautiful town, and I think it looked so much like Køge.
I could not wake up this day, my eyes simply CLOSED while I was eating breakfast. But I had to pull my self TOGETHER, because this day we were supposed to go to a certain place at a hill in Bornholm. At this hill we were given some exercises which we were supposed to solve in a (period of) short time.
THIS night, we held a party in our house, and almost everyone from the class came over. Because of that we barely slept THIS night. (jeg ville skrive this fordi det er en dagbog.. men det må du selv bestemme:-))
At last, we arrived to Bornholm, and the houses in Hasle in which we were supposed to sleep in. I liked those houses in particular, because they WERE (i stedet for where) very big and nicely furnished. I was ( mener du ikke styed in a room... i hvert fald hvis du vil sgade at det var der i overnattede) in room with Bilal.
When we returned to our homes in Hasle, everyone was given a job to prepare the dinner(måske ville jeg hellere skrive: everyone had to help preparing the dinner). Soon we were ALL eating together and HAD lots of fun. Every house HAD TO prepare AN entertainment show, which we were supposed to show in front of the rest of the class.
The rest of this day passed by WITH parties to late night. In particular, we had lots of fun with a water pipe in which we tried to put many different things in and then smoke them.
Unfortunately, this was the day we HAD TO go home to SEALAND. But we really tried to enjoy the last time of our stay AT Bornholm. Therefore, we went for a trip to some of the most beautiful places I have ever seen in Denmark. Although we had to walk for a long (period of) time, it was worth it, because of the beautiful sight.
We walked back to our houses, WHERE a bus came and took us to Rønne from where we HAD TO SAIL with the ferry back to Ystad. But we had some spare time in Rønne, and some of my friends and I went to McDonalds to get SOME FOOD. I really DO NOT understand why they HAVE PLACED McDonalds so FAR away from the city. We had to walk 50 minuets to get to it! And we really COULD NOT walk back again, so we called a taxi WHICH drove us to the ferry. AT the ferry, I bought some souvenirs for my family and lots of candy for MYSELF.
When I came (back) home, I was really tired because I had only slept for about 6 hours (at all) AT Bornholm. So I went to sleep and DID NOT WAKE up for the next 15 hours.
And that was my trip to Bornholm!
Håber du kan bruge det til noget, sig hvis der er noget du ikke forstår hvorfor jeg har rettet det.
Det er jo noget der har forgået så det skal nok helst være i datid
When we arrived to Ystad, a ferry was waiting for us and the other passengers, the heard that the ferry is one of the fastest in the world!...
fostår ikke helt hvad du mener med the heard that... du må mene noget andet der
When we came home, we were HAD A LITTLE spare time, which we used to go to THE BIGGEST TOWN OF BORNHOLM (det er ikke hovedstaden, men bare den største by på øen) called Rønne. It was a beautiful town, and I think it looked so much like Køge.
I could not wake up this day, my eyes simply CLOSED while I was eating breakfast. But I had to pull my self TOGETHER, because this day we were supposed to go to a certain place at a hill in Bornholm. At this hill we were given some exercises which we were supposed to solve in a (period of) short time.
THIS night, we held a party in our house, and almost everyone from the class came over. Because of that we barely slept THIS night. (jeg ville skrive this fordi det er en dagbog.. men det må du selv bestemme:-))
At last, we arrived to Bornholm, and the houses in Hasle in which we were supposed to sleep in. I liked those houses in particular, because they WERE (i stedet for where) very big and nicely furnished. I was ( mener du ikke styed in a room... i hvert fald hvis du vil sgade at det var der i overnattede) in room with Bilal.
When we returned to our homes in Hasle, everyone was given a job to prepare the dinner(måske ville jeg hellere skrive: everyone had to help preparing the dinner). Soon we were ALL eating together and HAD lots of fun. Every house HAD TO prepare AN entertainment show, which we were supposed to show in front of the rest of the class.
The rest of this day passed by WITH parties to late night. In particular, we had lots of fun with a water pipe in which we tried to put many different things in and then smoke them.
Unfortunately, this was the day we HAD TO go home to SEALAND. But we really tried to enjoy the last time of our stay AT Bornholm. Therefore, we went for a trip to some of the most beautiful places I have ever seen in Denmark. Although we had to walk for a long (period of) time, it was worth it, because of the beautiful sight.
We walked back to our houses, WHERE a bus came and took us to Rønne from where we HAD TO SAIL with the ferry back to Ystad. But we had some spare time in Rønne, and some of my friends and I went to McDonalds to get SOME FOOD. I really DO NOT understand why they HAVE PLACED McDonalds so FAR away from the city. We had to walk 50 minuets to get to it! And we really COULD NOT walk back again, so we called a taxi WHICH drove us to the ferry. AT the ferry, I bought some souvenirs for my family and lots of candy for MYSELF.
When I came (back) home, I was really tired because I had only slept for about 6 hours (at all) AT Bornholm. So I went to sleep and DID NOT WAKE up for the next 15 hours.
And that was my trip to Bornholm!
Håber du kan bruge det til noget, sig hvis der er noget du ikke forstår hvorfor jeg har rettet det.
Svar #2
03. april 2006 af bllcrp88 (Slettet)
mange mange tak... har rettet det du har sagt og det kan virkelig bruges..... læser du på ymnasiet eller hvor?
Svar #3
03. april 2006 af chrissy86_2630 (Slettet)
jeg læser på handelshøjskolen i københavn på 2. år. Hvor jeg har engelsk som hovedfag og spansk som bifag.
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