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05. maj 2006 af figaro8 (Slettet)

But then we also have read a book, named “the wave”. And it’s about a schoolteacher actually, named Ben Ross. One day he teaches in history, where one of the student’s, asked him about, how Hitler could became so must power, out of nothing. And this question he simply just can’t answer. Then next Ben Ross went home, and he can still not forget this question, so he reads allot of books, about Hitler and his way living, trying to find the answer. The following day in the history lessen, Ben Ross tries to get control over the student’s on a quiet way in the beginning, and after few weeks, Ben Ross has the full control over all student’s at the school, they have create the group called “the wave”. They got their strong motto, which says “Strength through discipline, strength through community, strength through action!”. But then at last after 2 weeks, Ben Ross told the whole school that they have been acting like Nazis past the last 2 weeks, and that was really hard to swallow for the student’s.
You can say that the theme in this book is demagogy, and the funny is, that this book is authentic, which I think is a bit scary, and overwhelming.

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Svar #1
05. maj 2006 af M-ria (Slettet)

...of the student’s, (asked) is asking him about...
...(became) become so (must) much power...

Det er kun nogle få ud af mange.. desværre kan jeg ikke nå at rette flere..

Svar #2
05. maj 2006 af figaro8 (Slettet)

hvorfor ikke became, når det er lang tid siden det foregik.

Svar #3
05. maj 2006 af figaro8 (Slettet)

men evt nogen, som kunne tage et kig på resten?

Svar #4
05. maj 2006 af figaro8 (Slettet)

en eller anden bare?? behøver ikke være 100% detaljeret rettelse.

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Svar #5
05. maj 2006 af dnadan (Slettet)

Laver lige nogle hurtige rettelser...:

We have read a book, named “the wave”. It’s about a schoolteacher,named Ben Ross. One day he taught in history, where one of the student’s, asked him about, how Hitler could become so much power, out of nothing. And this question he simply just can’t answer. After the class Ben Ross went home, and he can still not forget this question, so he reads a lot of books, about Hitler and his way of living, trying to find the answer. The following day in the history lesson Ben Ross tries to get control over the students on a quiet way in the beginning, and after a couple of weeks, Ben Ross has the full control over all students at the school, they have created the group called “the wave”. They got their strong motto, which says “Strength through discipline, strength through community, strength through action!”. But then at last after 2 weeks, Ben Ross told the whole school that they have been acting like Nazis the past 2 weeks, and that was really hard to swallow for the students.
You can say that the theme in this book(novel?/ short story...brug aldrig book når du ved noget mere prævist) is demagogy, and the funny thing is, that this book(igen novel?) is authentic, which I think is a bit scary, and overwhelming.

Generelt... der er en del fejl mht. nogle sætninger som lige skal kigges lidt extra på, hold dig til en tid, helst nutid. Og en sidste ting prøv at lade være med at skrive de der typiske talesprogssætninger...

Jeg har bare rettet det jeg lige kunne se med første overkast... men der er sikkert en del flere...

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Svar #6
05. maj 2006 af dnadan (Slettet)

#5 overkast=øjekast...

Svar #7
05. maj 2006 af figaro8 (Slettet)

ok tak, men heder demagogi virkelig demagogy, var nemlig i tvivl?

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Svar #8
05. maj 2006 af dnadan (Slettet)

slå det op i en ordbog... for at være ærlig så kender jeg ikk det dansk ord...men god weekend..

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