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INTET komma foran that. Der er også andre ting, men jeg orker ikke at kigge på det nu :-)

oki tak... øhh hehe.. må man spørge hvad de andre ting var?? hehe

"After we have talked"

"have" skal ikke med.

Kig lige på det hele een gang til *S*

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1) After we talked about what it is that makes this fairytale interesting, moving and funny. We figured out that a very important part, in this fairytale is that this fairytale is very short. It’s not a big and boring fairytale you have to spend hours to read, but it is more like a small freak story, which is very easy to read and good as a starting point, because it makes it very funny and not boring as well. Besides that it is a very simple story, and it’s not build up by details. Fore sample when jack gets a job, we just hear where he was hired, what his pay was, and how he looses his pay on his way back to his mother. We like that it is simplified, and after all we think this fairytale makes you feel happy, exactly because it’s very easy to read and to understand.

kiggede lige på det igen, og der kom lige lidt input.

Husk stort begyndelsesbogstav på Jack


Du hørte ikke noget - du "læste" det "we just hear(d) where".

Om ikke andet så ville jeg skrive det sådan.*S*

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