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hurtigt rettelse??

22. oktober 2006 af Lisa02 (Slettet)

In the news you often see president of The United State: George Walker Bush, he’s after my oppinion a very clever, and a person who’s really hard to understand. I think the world follows USA, in their policy system, rules, traditions as Halloween, TV-shows, channels, and especially the movies, fashion, buildings, and I could go on...
We all know there lived and still do live African Americans in USA, and that they were slaves for the American white people back in time. But a more chocking thing is that Denmark helped USA by transportion of the white people from their contries to USA.
I think that was one of the thousands reasons racism wide spread enormous. And that’s maybe why, there had and still have so many conflicts between white and black people.

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Svar #1
22. oktober 2006 af -Zeta- (Slettet)

#0: Få hurtigere rettelser:
oppinion --> opinion
contries --> countries
transportion --> transportation

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Svar #2
22. oktober 2006 af -Zeta- (Slettet)

Lidt til:
--> "the President of The United State" (There is only
--> "I think that this was one of thousands reasons, which caused racism to spread enormous."

Der er dog stadig en del kommafejl, syntax og tvetydige samt fordanskede sætninger.

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Svar #3
22. oktober 2006 af -Zeta- (Slettet)

Hovsa. "the President of the United States of America" (There is only one president of US, therefore 'the')

Svar #4
22. oktober 2006 af Lisa02 (Slettet)

1000 gange tak :-)

lyder dette fint? :
So, she want’s us to be like Michael Jackon? Hell no!
She must accept us, as we are. Beacause we accept her as she is.

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Svar #5
22. oktober 2006 af Qras (Slettet)

Rettelse til #2:

Mangler der ikke et "of":
I think this was one of thousands of reasons + det hedder enormousLY..

#4: Det lyder fint, men det hedder:

So, she wants us.. + drop kommaet i: She must accept us as we are..

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Svar #6
22. oktober 2006 af -Zeta- (Slettet)

#5:

Tror ikke der skal være 'of' mellem 'thousands' og 'reasons'. Det kommer dog lidt an på den opringelig mening/betydning.

Og ja, det er helt rigtigt, at det hedder 'enormously', da det jo er et adverbium som beskriver 'spread' (et verbum). :-)

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