Hurtig rettelse?

Hey, nogle der lige vil kigge det her igennem, Tak

In connection to our “Job - day” where we inform our school leavers about all the possibilities to start their own firm, we will like you, Shell Livewire, to come and give a talk to all the students about their odds to be a successfully entrepreneur.
The “day” will take place the 4 November 2006 just beside the big Main hall at the big football field. There will be about 900 interested students, who are ready to start their own firm, but need advice from you, how to do it, how to end up like a rich entrepreneur, the costs and the risk etc. So we well be very pleased, if you will come and hold a talk to the young hopeful students.
We want exactly your firm, because your reputation is good, and we know you have helped some of the biggest entrepreneurs in the country, so it will be an honour to have you here and some of the students have also wished about your presence.
We have also got this idea that if you thank yes to this letter, maybe you’ll bring some of your suc-cessfully entrepreneurs, so he/she can talk about their experience with the”entrepreneur world” I think it will be a great idea, then the students can see its not impossible to start their own company, and they can ask a real entrepreneur questions.
We are looking forward to hear from you, and we hope you will thank yes to this letter.