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lille rettelse
26. november 2006 af
tobeornottobe (Slettet)
Hej alle sammen!!!
Jeg skal lave en karakteristik over hovedpersonen i en lille historie og hendens liv på ca. 150 ord. Håber at der er nogen der vil rette den, og fortælle mig om det det er en rigtig måde at gøre det på...
PÅ forhånd tak!!!
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Miriam is a woman, who tries to cheer people up by making them look at the world in a different way. Due to this habit has her husband left her, even though it is positive and people around Miriam ought to be proud of her. That result in her illness and a feeling of loneliness. She is regular at the hospital because of some problems with her heart.
She lives alone in a big house but she tries to get over her loneliness by working for a long time and regarding her colleagues as family and friends. Miriam runs a successful nursing agency and the work at it constitutes the greater part of her life. She is very happy with her busy business live, which gives her no time for thinking about impertinence things. Nevertheless, some times she feels alone especially when she is at the hospital and needs people to be beside her.
Jeg skal lave en karakteristik over hovedpersonen i en lille historie og hendens liv på ca. 150 ord. Håber at der er nogen der vil rette den, og fortælle mig om det det er en rigtig måde at gøre det på...
PÅ forhånd tak!!!
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Miriam is a woman, who tries to cheer people up by making them look at the world in a different way. Due to this habit has her husband left her, even though it is positive and people around Miriam ought to be proud of her. That result in her illness and a feeling of loneliness. She is regular at the hospital because of some problems with her heart.
She lives alone in a big house but she tries to get over her loneliness by working for a long time and regarding her colleagues as family and friends. Miriam runs a successful nursing agency and the work at it constitutes the greater part of her life. She is very happy with her busy business live, which gives her no time for thinking about impertinence things. Nevertheless, some times she feels alone especially when she is at the hospital and needs people to be beside her.
Svar #1
26. november 2006 af tobeornottobe (Slettet)
skrev lige hvor I laver rettelserne, altså i hvilke sætning/-er
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