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25. januar 2007 af
Hans4444 (Slettet)
Nogen som vil rette denne tekst (korrekt på dansk):
Dansk:
Peter var en god fodboldspiller, en af de bedste, vi havde. Når holdet spillede, rejste (travel) vi med (by) bus eller tog til byen, hvor kampen fandt (take) sted.
Engang skete det, at en fyr skød en svær bold; Peter faldt, men greb bolden med en hånd. Vi følte os (feel) meget stolte.
Han blev (become) så god, at klubben solgte ham til en udenlandsk klub. Hans danske klub fik en masse penge, da de overførte (transfer) ham.
Så rejste han til England; folk var glade [for], at han trådte ind i (join) deres klub, og de heppede (cheer), når han løb ind på banen (field).
Han kæmpede godt (well) for sit hold, og de vandt meget tit. Men en dag mente (think) han, at det var nok, så han standsede sin karriere (career), pakkede sine ting og vendte tilbage (return) til gode gamle Danmark.
Engelsk:
Peter was a good football player, one of the best, we have. When the team played, travel we by bus or train to the city, where game take places.
Once it happened that a guy shouted a difficult ball; Peter fall; but he catch(ed)? the ball with one hand. We feel very proud.
Han become so good that the club sold him to a foreign club. His Danish club a lot of money, and then they transfer him.
Then he travel to England; people was happy for that he join their club, and they cheer, when he run on the field.
He fights well for his team, and they win often. But someday he thinks that it was enough, so the enough stopped his career, packed his thing and return to good old Denmark.
På forhånd tak.
Dansk:
Peter var en god fodboldspiller, en af de bedste, vi havde. Når holdet spillede, rejste (travel) vi med (by) bus eller tog til byen, hvor kampen fandt (take) sted.
Engang skete det, at en fyr skød en svær bold; Peter faldt, men greb bolden med en hånd. Vi følte os (feel) meget stolte.
Han blev (become) så god, at klubben solgte ham til en udenlandsk klub. Hans danske klub fik en masse penge, da de overførte (transfer) ham.
Så rejste han til England; folk var glade [for], at han trådte ind i (join) deres klub, og de heppede (cheer), når han løb ind på banen (field).
Han kæmpede godt (well) for sit hold, og de vandt meget tit. Men en dag mente (think) han, at det var nok, så han standsede sin karriere (career), pakkede sine ting og vendte tilbage (return) til gode gamle Danmark.
Engelsk:
Peter was a good football player, one of the best, we have. When the team played, travel we by bus or train to the city, where game take places.
Once it happened that a guy shouted a difficult ball; Peter fall; but he catch(ed)? the ball with one hand. We feel very proud.
Han become so good that the club sold him to a foreign club. His Danish club a lot of money, and then they transfer him.
Then he travel to England; people was happy for that he join their club, and they cheer, when he run on the field.
He fights well for his team, and they win often. But someday he thinks that it was enough, so the enough stopped his career, packed his thing and return to good old Denmark.
På forhånd tak.
Svar #1
25. januar 2007 af T83 (Slettet)
Peter was a good football player, one of the best, we had. When the team played, we travelled by bus or train to the city, where match took place.
Once it happened that a guy shot a difficult ball; Peter fell down; but he caught the ball with one hand. We felt very proud.
Han became that good that the club sold him to a foreign club. His Danish club got a lot of money, when they transferred him.
Then he travelled to England; the people were happy about him joining their club, and they cheered him, every time he ran on the field.
He fought well for his team and they often won. But someday he thought, it was enough, so he finished his career, packed his things and returned to good old Denmark.
Once it happened that a guy shot a difficult ball; Peter fell down; but he caught the ball with one hand. We felt very proud.
Han became that good that the club sold him to a foreign club. His Danish club got a lot of money, when they transferred him.
Then he travelled to England; the people were happy about him joining their club, and they cheered him, every time he ran on the field.
He fought well for his team and they often won. But someday he thought, it was enough, so he finished his career, packed his things and returned to good old Denmark.
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