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Har rettet dette men vil gerne have en anden til og rette også...
15. marts 2007 af
ralsted (Slettet)
Apple
In 1976, when Jobs were 21 and Wozniak 26, they established Apple Computer in Jobs garage. Their first product was the”personal” computer: Apple I. In 1977 introduced Apple the successor, Apple II, that becomes a huge success and makes Apple to a very influential company in the increasing computertrade. I 1980 Apple got quoted on the stock exchange, and the Jobs and Wozniak become multi-millionaire.
In 1983 hired Apple, John Sculley for take over Jobs leadership. Sculley, who came from Pepsi-Cola, came immediately gut out with jobs, but in 1985 ended a power struggle between them, with jobs resignation from the company.
After he leaved Apple, Jobs go on a long in Italy, before he founded the data corporation NeXT Computer. In 1996 NeXT were bought by Apple, and in 1997 Steve Jobs take over the leadership of Apple, after the manager, Gil Amelio, were kicked-out of the company.
In 1976, when Jobs were 21 and Wozniak 26, they established Apple Computer in Jobs garage. Their first product was the”personal” computer: Apple I. In 1977 introduced Apple the successor, Apple II, that becomes a huge success and makes Apple to a very influential company in the increasing computertrade. I 1980 Apple got quoted on the stock exchange, and the Jobs and Wozniak become multi-millionaire.
In 1983 hired Apple, John Sculley for take over Jobs leadership. Sculley, who came from Pepsi-Cola, came immediately gut out with jobs, but in 1985 ended a power struggle between them, with jobs resignation from the company.
After he leaved Apple, Jobs go on a long in Italy, before he founded the data corporation NeXT Computer. In 1996 NeXT were bought by Apple, and in 1997 Steve Jobs take over the leadership of Apple, after the manager, Gil Amelio, were kicked-out of the company.
Svar #1
15. marts 2007 af annewerneburg (Slettet)
du har rettet - nå, men det er vigtigt at du checker din ordstilling (bl.a. verbums placering i sætningen). og Tom´s bag (=toms taske) skrives sådan.
aw...på den igen...!
aw...på den igen...!
Svar #2
15. marts 2007 af Katrine (Slettet)
Du har sikkert rettet den i word, hvor word har sagt, at du havde kongruensfejl, hvergang du skrev Steve Jobs. Har jeg ret? ;)
Jobs er jo navnet på en person, og ikke 'job' i flertal. Dvs. at verbum skal være i ental. Derudover skal du, som anne skriver, tjekke din ordstilling. Du skal følge SPOA reglen.. Subject (grundled) Predicator (udsagnsled) Object (genstandsled) og Adverb. Så du skal altså tænke på, at på engelsk kommer grundleddet før udsagnsledet.
Hvis du lige ser på det, og skriver tilbage, så skal jeg nok rette resten af fejlene (Der er fejl i nogle bøjninger samt kongruensfejl)
Jobs er jo navnet på en person, og ikke 'job' i flertal. Dvs. at verbum skal være i ental. Derudover skal du, som anne skriver, tjekke din ordstilling. Du skal følge SPOA reglen.. Subject (grundled) Predicator (udsagnsled) Object (genstandsled) og Adverb. Så du skal altså tænke på, at på engelsk kommer grundleddet før udsagnsledet.
Hvis du lige ser på det, og skriver tilbage, så skal jeg nok rette resten af fejlene (Der er fejl i nogle bøjninger samt kongruensfejl)
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