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hej nogen der vil rette lidt engelsk og har forslag til et karakter?
15. maj 2004 af
suzie (Slettet)
er der ikke nogen der vil rette den her korte engelsk stil??og bagefter sige om den er god eller dårlig og hvad den fortjener.(karakter).den skal rettes i nutid, tak på forhånd.
Summary about “De udfordrer døden for at blive fanget af livet”.
The article is written by Merete Carlsen in October 1998. She writes about wild sport, how it attracts the young people in the rich countries and why it attracts them.
Elder people cannot understand the young people which interest in wild sport and they cannot understand why it is only young people in the rich countries which interests. Maybe it’s because they are so protected and spoiled that they need the extremes to feel that they are alive.
The wild sports begins in 50’es in USA, but it keeps secret. Today it’s not secret anymore and it get the Medias interest, because they have been organized and commercialized and they have been like a culture. The extreme sport has been very visible about the last 4-5 years. It is like using drugs and it is maybe therefore the young people do it. Some young people break their limit to see how they can handle, physical and mental. They drop themselves out with bungee jumping, climb on mounts and jump with parachute from high places. It’s more men then women there like the wild sport, because the men have bigger body strength then women. Young people mean that the world has been more boring and now they will do something someone never has done before and therefore they choose the wild sports.
Summary about “De udfordrer døden for at blive fanget af livet”.
The article is written by Merete Carlsen in October 1998. She writes about wild sport, how it attracts the young people in the rich countries and why it attracts them.
Elder people cannot understand the young people which interest in wild sport and they cannot understand why it is only young people in the rich countries which interests. Maybe it’s because they are so protected and spoiled that they need the extremes to feel that they are alive.
The wild sports begins in 50’es in USA, but it keeps secret. Today it’s not secret anymore and it get the Medias interest, because they have been organized and commercialized and they have been like a culture. The extreme sport has been very visible about the last 4-5 years. It is like using drugs and it is maybe therefore the young people do it. Some young people break their limit to see how they can handle, physical and mental. They drop themselves out with bungee jumping, climb on mounts and jump with parachute from high places. It’s more men then women there like the wild sport, because the men have bigger body strength then women. Young people mean that the world has been more boring and now they will do something someone never has done before and therefore they choose the wild sports.
Svar #1
15. maj 2004 af Symmanine (Slettet)
The article is written by Merete Carlsen in October 1998. She writes about wild sports, how it attracts the young people in (the) richer countries, and about why it attracts them.
Elderly people cannot understand the young people who are interestted in wild sports, and they cannot understand why it is only younger people in (the) richer countries which interests. (which it interrets?)
Maybe it is because they are so
protected and spoiled that they need extremety to feel that they are alive.
The wild sports began in 50’ties in USA, but it was keept a secret (??). Today it is a not secret anymore and it attracts the interrest of the Medias', because it has been organized and commercialized, and it has evolved into a culture. The extreme sports have been very visible throughout the last 4-5 years. It is like being on drugs perhaps that is reason why the young people do it(are so attracted by extreme sports. Some young people break their limits to see how they can handle it, physically and mentally. They drop themselves out with bungee jumping, climb on mounts and jump with parachutes from high places. It is mostly men rather than women who like the wild sports, because the men have a greater body strength than women. Young people think that the world has been more boring (??) and now they will do something someone never has done before and therefore they choose the wild sports.
Har ikke haft tid til at rette særlig grundigt igennem, så måske en anden også vil kigge på det? Er på vej ud af døren med har lige skimmet igennem og rettet hist og her - til mine egne forslag. Visse steder synes jeg sproget er temmelig knudret og meningen ikke helt tydelig.
Jeg ville nok give 7,5 for den her... 8 måske.
Elderly people cannot understand the young people who are interestted in wild sports, and they cannot understand why it is only younger people in (the) richer countries which interests. (which it interrets?)
Maybe it is because they are so
protected and spoiled that they need extremety to feel that they are alive.
The wild sports began in 50’ties in USA, but it was keept a secret (??). Today it is a not secret anymore and it attracts the interrest of the Medias', because it has been organized and commercialized, and it has evolved into a culture. The extreme sports have been very visible throughout the last 4-5 years. It is like being on drugs perhaps that is reason why the young people do it(are so attracted by extreme sports. Some young people break their limits to see how they can handle it, physically and mentally. They drop themselves out with bungee jumping, climb on mounts and jump with parachutes from high places. It is mostly men rather than women who like the wild sports, because the men have a greater body strength than women. Young people think that the world has been more boring (??) and now they will do something someone never has done before and therefore they choose the wild sports.
Har ikke haft tid til at rette særlig grundigt igennem, så måske en anden også vil kigge på det? Er på vej ud af døren med har lige skimmet igennem og rettet hist og her - til mine egne forslag. Visse steder synes jeg sproget er temmelig knudret og meningen ikke helt tydelig.
Jeg ville nok give 7,5 for den her... 8 måske.
Svar #2
15. maj 2004 af wicked (Slettet)
Summary about “De udfordrer døden for at blive fanget af livet”.
The article is written by Merete Carlsen in October 1998. She writes about wild sportS, how it attracts the young people in the rich countries and why it attracts them.
Elder people cannot understand the young people WHO ARE interestED in wild sportS and they cannot understand why it is only young people in the rich countries WHO ARE interestED. Maybe it’s because they are so protected and spoiled that they need the extremes to feel that they are alive.
The wild sportS begAn in 50’ies in USA, but THEY WERE keepT A secret. Today THEY’RE not A secret anymore and THEY get the Medias interest, because they have been organized and commercialized and they have been BECOMING a culture. The extreme sport has been very visible about the last 4-5 years. It is like using drugs and it is maybe therefore the young people do it. Some young people break their limit to see how they can handle, physical and mental. They DO bungee jumping, climb mountAINS and jump with parachuteS from high places. It’s more men thAn women who like the wild sports, because men have bigger body strength thAn women. Young people THINK/BELIEVE that the world IS more boring and now they will do something someone never has done before and therefore they choose the wild sports.
OK. DET ER BARE LIGE HURTIGT LØBET IGENNEM. MINE RETTELSER ER MED STORT, OG DER ER NOGET JEG HAR FJERNET MEN DET MÅ DU SELV KIGGE IGENNEM. EN DEL GRAMMATISKE FEJL. UMIDDELBART, EN 7-8 STYKKER, ALT AF HÆNGIG AF LÆRER OG NIVEAU. HÅBER DET ER EN HJÆLP.
The article is written by Merete Carlsen in October 1998. She writes about wild sportS, how it attracts the young people in the rich countries and why it attracts them.
Elder people cannot understand the young people WHO ARE interestED in wild sportS and they cannot understand why it is only young people in the rich countries WHO ARE interestED. Maybe it’s because they are so protected and spoiled that they need the extremes to feel that they are alive.
The wild sportS begAn in 50’ies in USA, but THEY WERE keepT A secret. Today THEY’RE not A secret anymore and THEY get the Medias interest, because they have been organized and commercialized and they have been BECOMING a culture. The extreme sport has been very visible about the last 4-5 years. It is like using drugs and it is maybe therefore the young people do it. Some young people break their limit to see how they can handle, physical and mental. They DO bungee jumping, climb mountAINS and jump with parachuteS from high places. It’s more men thAn women who like the wild sports, because men have bigger body strength thAn women. Young people THINK/BELIEVE that the world IS more boring and now they will do something someone never has done before and therefore they choose the wild sports.
OK. DET ER BARE LIGE HURTIGT LØBET IGENNEM. MINE RETTELSER ER MED STORT, OG DER ER NOGET JEG HAR FJERNET MEN DET MÅ DU SELV KIGGE IGENNEM. EN DEL GRAMMATISKE FEJL. UMIDDELBART, EN 7-8 STYKKER, ALT AF HÆNGIG AF LÆRER OG NIVEAU. HÅBER DET ER EN HJÆLP.
Svar #3
16. maj 2004 af zIOn (Slettet)
Er du sikker på at det ikke skal være DATID, f.eks. i første linie:
The article WAS written ...
The article WAS written ...
Svar #5
16. maj 2004 af Samuel (Slettet)
"The article is being written.."
"The article is going to be written.."
Arj, vel?
"The article is going to be written.."
Arj, vel?
Svar #6
18. maj 2004 af Symmanine (Slettet)
#4 + 5:
Nej, du har ret. Det skal hedde "The article was written... " men derfor kan resten godt være i nutid.
Man kunne også bare sige "The article --title- by -author- from -year-" så er man uden om nutid/datids formuleringsproblemer i dén sætning.
Nej, du har ret. Det skal hedde "The article was written... " men derfor kan resten godt være i nutid.
Man kunne også bare sige "The article --title- by -author- from -year-" så er man uden om nutid/datids formuleringsproblemer i dén sætning.
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