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04. oktober 2007 af Mussy06 (Slettet)

Nogen der vil kigge og rette det igennem?

While I’m sitting here on a big, high hill I just observe everything around me. The grass I’m sitting on is moist. There is 2 little trees in front of me even though they are smaller than other trees it doesn’t mean that they aren’t beautiful. I normally assume that trees are just big plants we use in Christmas and good to have with us so we can get a good quantity of oxygen. They are also our “keeper” for our delicious fruits. But do we misuse them? Yes? No? Maybe, I think because we cut many trees down nowadays because of our needs which obviously give us humans and therefore also animals big consequences in the nearer future with lots of changes in the climate which probably ends with total chaos, destruction and death on our Earth – according to the scientists and researchers.

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Svar #1
04. oktober 2007 af Erik Morsing (Slettet)

kig den lige selv igennem en gang til, der er lidt småting, men ellers er den god.

Svar #2
05. oktober 2007 af Mussy06 (Slettet)

ups fandt lige en fejl selv, THERE ARE TWO LITTLE TREES ***

Men andre? :S

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Svar #3
05. oktober 2007 af Erik Morsing (Slettet)

Ordstilling: cut down many trees – ikke sammentrlkninger på skrift, det er ikke pænt. Brug bogstaver ved tal under 10

While (I am) sitting here on a big, high hill I just observe everything around me. The grass (I am) sitting on is moist. There are (two) little trees in front of me(.) Even though they are smaller than other trees it (does not) mean that they (are not) beautiful. I normally assume that trees are just big plants we use (on) Christmas and good to have with us so we can get a (sufficient amount) of oxygen. They are also (carriers of) our delicious fruits. But do we misuse them? Yes? No? Maybe, I think because we (cut down) many trees nowadays (I order to satisfy) of our needs (for wood) which obviously (causes) (human beings) and therefore also animals big consequences in the (near) future with lots of changes (on) the climate which probably ends (in) total chaos, destruction and death on our Earth – according to the scientists and researchers

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06. oktober 2007 af Mussy06 (Slettet)

Svar #5
06. oktober 2007 af Mussy06 (Slettet)

MANGE TAK ERIK :D.

Så sammentrækninger skal jeg ikke bruge?

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Svar #6
06. oktober 2007 af Erik Morsing (Slettet)

Du kan godt bruge dem, men det anses ikke for at være pænt på skrift. Skriver du til vennerne, så brug dem bare, men søger du et job, så lad være.

Svar #7
06. oktober 2007 af Mussy06 (Slettet)

#6 Hvad så med stile ?

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Svar #8
06. oktober 2007 af Erik Morsing (Slettet)

Spørg hellere din lærer, hvad han synes. På universitetet er det i hvert fald bandlyst.

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